I spent thw whole afternoon binge reading this entire story. I am hooked. Maybe you can have Charlie Weasley or Bewt Scamander or Xenophilius Lovegood be in charge of the last part of the creatures division. I think any of them would be a good choice. And please let us see Norbert(a) in the story again.

Wonderful job on this. Maybe Newt Scamander or Xenophilius Lovegood can help with the creatures division. Maybe Newt can take care of the basilisk!? That would be amazing. Then instead of killing it it could be in a sanctuary with a good parselmouth witch or Wizard to help care for it.

If you ever get around to writing/loading another chapter... for God's sake STOP WRITING 'THEN' EVERY TIME YOU MEAN 'THAN'.
Their meanings are radically different.

Thanks for FINALLY switching to using the correct nickname for Lupin. Your offensive misuse of the surname Mooney was really pissing me off.

Ciao.

It's conniption fit.

Please post the next chapters

Please stop misnaming Lupin as Mooney. That is a normal human surname, and has fuck all to do with lycanthropy. The nickname used in the JKR books is MOONY, as in related to the moon and directly correlating to his werewolf status.
I personally regard FF writers who fail this bloody obvious point as being either lazy or careless of their terminology. I request you to 'Find & Replace' all use of MOONEY with the canon nickname MOONY.
Then execute your beta. Defenestration from basement windows! Profiterole firing squad!
Death By Chocolate!
Ciao

PS, yep, I am a gonch.

A press conference at 4:30 in the morning?!

I can’t tolerate any more of this. I hate Sirius. I hate dumbledor. I hate snape. And this idiotic version of Harry is playing games.

For having written this story before canon was finished the whole background of things is a pretty decent guess and much better done than JKR for its reasonableness.

I would like to see the malfroy‘s transforms, a family into a force for good and find a way for Harry to remove the dark mark or when Voldemort gets Kabash, he can take the dark marks with him if the person truly repent. That’s just an idea I really like Draco and I think Draco and Lucius and Narcissa could really be a force for good, but there’s not a lot of stories out there that give them a chance. I read quite a few good ones though and I really would like to see some more for them. I would also like to see more for snape. He does so much I know he feels guilty in the story, but there’s more to him the potions he could create alone. I really get into Harry Potter, but more family then story I like your story so far it’s really good and I hope Luna has a better time in the story than she has in the books. I really think she’s cool.

I know that his attitude is normal all things considered, but I am really starting to get tired of Remus poking his nose in Harry’s business. Every 2 chapters is Remus being distrusting and Harry trying to keep everything together.

When does Harry start taking out the flunkies? They are out there killing and raping, they need to be neutralized! Who will Harry have as a love interest? Looking forward to more?

Minnie slapping down Snape is always funny!

Excellent chapter! Excellent story so far, keep it up!