| Reviews for Manipulating Fate |
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   Diana Quill chapter 31 . 8/11/2017 i know it's been years but pleeeeeaaaase continue this, it's great! |
| bellapom chapter 31 . 7/19/2017 Awesome story |
| KaiKaiRee chapter 11 . 6/5/2017 "Deadpanned" would not be the word to describe Remus' reaction to Harry's treatment, More like horror or rage. To deadpan means to say something funny in a serious manner. |
| ironhair chapter 31 . 6/2/2017 I hope all is well in real life and I really hope you come back some day to finish this story. It's been a great read so far and would love to read more of your description of Harry's Journey. |
| ironhair chapter 30 . 6/2/2017 Lots of indian influences.. a refreshing change :) |
| ironhair chapter 27 . 6/1/2017 I hope you do live up to your AN and did end up completing this story. It's been a great read so far. |
| ironhair chapter 5 . 5/29/2017 Wow |
| ironhair chapter 1 . 5/25/2017 Reading |
| Bjalf chapter 2 . 4/28/2017 'Shieldus Magikus Detection'? I'm going to hurt you. |
| LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 5 . 4/22/2017 Fireplaces in an office building that high ... no dear author, that is not possible :p lets just imagine that they dont need to be fully functional to work as floo shall we :p ? Also, thus far i like the concept but based on the mount of chapters and where we are at now in the story i highly doubt i will see an ending... Gaps in the plot to me are in harrys actions. Mostly, hes a potion master but does nothing to fix his malnutrion from neglect. He comes up with an idea for a company that becomes pointless within 4 years due to the fact its in the middle of the hotzone for conflict, namely London... the ideas arent bad, far from it, its mostly just the application of logic and practical knowledge that hurt the plot a little. I think that when youre older such gaps be overcome, for now however I believe this can be remedied by using a google search. |
| Guest chapter 31 . 4/9/2017 PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE IT'S So GOOD I LOVE IT My heart is breaking that it's hasn't updated after 9 yrs. |
| Goatboy12345 chapter 31 . 4/5/2017 it's been 9 years... |
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 2/27/2017 Interesting idea and plot and chapter |
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/25/2017 The sad part, but cool, part is, I understanding pig Latin. . . -The Warper |
| Bluebird555 chapter 31 . 1/6/2017 Nooooooo. You can't abandon the story here. I hate when I find a story with a good plot that suddenly ends just as new information has been presented. I need to know what happens next. This is an awesome story, and your grammar and depth of character makes this a interesting and realistic story. Because you have no random plot holes or underdeveloped characters this story is easy to get lost in and allows the reader to imagine another universe that they can escape to while reading. This is what I love about reading. Please continue this story, after all it's better late than never. |