| Reviews for Manipulating Fate |
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   Squarekiddo chapter 5 . 3/9/2016 Okay now its getting abit less neat. Im getting this bad feeling like Harry is going to force his other timeline to happen, e.g. Let troll attack Hermione for bonds etc etc. Such things are just stupid in my eyes. Hope it dosnt happen. |
| Squarekiddo chapter 3 . 3/9/2016 Just a quick thanks, Ive been in a real rut lately, read all stories that are 'in your face' so to say, its been so hard to find stories that dosnt drive me nuts. I wont go as far as to say that I love this story, its only been 3 chapters. But I am enjoying myself. |
| Squarekiddo chapter 2 . 3/9/2016 That spell was indeed funny, but seriously Latin is funny. its like almost every spell are made for comic relief. Honestly im shocked theres not a spell called 'Fetchio' instead of Accio. |
| Zecht chapter 10 . 3/8/2016 it takes too long to get to the point. Boring and predictable. If you want good time travel fic you need to add unexpected element. Like "Harry has a sister", or "mother alive" etc. It add variety in already overused plot device and give you more opportunities to build up story. And one more thing. Nobody likes build uo chapters like yours or "training" chapters. They are boring information dump. It works in movies because it rarely takes more that 10-20 minutes, but wasting a few hours on reading that shit? No thank you, there a hundreds more interesting fics to spend time on. My point - if you can't capture reader in first few chapters - it shitty chapters. And here i am on chapter ten - and it's boring like hell. |
| Milliza chapter 5 . 3/3/2016 It's to bad Gideon couldn't be alive too, but at least one of them got away, and hopefully Harry can get Sirius out of Azkaban soon and his name cleared. |
| Tyler Charles chapter 31 . 3/1/2016 please update soon this story is so awesome! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/1/2016 Firstly Harry was his seventh hocrux Also, Harry is acting way too childish for his age |
| Eagle-Eyes chapter 31 . 2/9/2016 Love that prank Harry pulled on them. Not really sure if it was a prank or not, but... Keep writing as life allows |
| Rose Hathaway Potter chapter 31 . 2/5/2016 I love it! |
| and chapter 31 . 1/16/2016 Loved the story, hope you post next chapter soon, and this PAIR? Someone older then 11 please? He could fell in love as Myers? |
| Oogies4u chapter 31 . 1/13/2016 Awesome story line :) |
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/2/2016 I really hope you get around to finishing this as I love your plot! The idea begin Harry's corporation is so interesting and your writing style is also really addictive despite the minor discrepancies (Aladdin etc.) :) |
| NatNicole chapter 1 . 12/24/2015 If badass Harry is any indication, this fic is going to be AWESOME. |
| The Black Lycan chapter 31 . 12/7/2015 A great story! Shame i found it so late. Hope you find a chance to finish it! |
| uwishuwerecool chapter 31 . 11/1/2015 more pls lovethe story |