Reviews for Manipulating Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please write more to this story! I love how Harry interacts with Remus and Sirius! I love how he is friends with Neville. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Shieldus Magikus Detection Every time I see spells like this, I cringe. Without fail. There ARE Latin dictionaries online you know. At least try to piece something believable together -.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very well written story that was entertaining as well. I don't suppose you'll find the muse again after so many years and finish it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the story. Any chance of it being finished sometime? |
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![]() ![]() Oh gods, chapter 29 was the funniest chapters of all I read in my entire year of 2015! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That scene with Harry throwing his proper two cents in at Dumbledore in his office? BRILLIANT and very satisfying! It's something I just realized I so desperately wanted out of your story. AMAZING! The words you use, the points Harry made. He is incredibly right and how did no one else of our generation that read the book realized these things the moment we read it in the books? Shameful. As I get closer and closer to the bottom of the page I cringe cuz I want it to keep going! This story is so interesting! There's so many elements in it that are new, unique and original! Plots I have never seen before in a Harry Potter time travel genre fic and believe me, I have read far past my fair share of time travel AUs. I don't know if you'll ever continue writing this wonderful, time-consumingly amazing fic but your story is definitely on alert list and I shall wait. And I could tell for awhile you were not gonna pair Harry with Ginny anymore. I'm just curious as to WHO you're planning on to. With my slasher mind I would think Neville but I don't know how to feel about that. Plus I don't know if you're a slasher or not. Either way I'm curious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was bloody brilliant! Go get him, Remus! Growl at that headmaster! While I don't hate Albus I'm so happy SOMEONE is caring about Harry enough to acknowledge all those years of neglect and abuse! Oh, as I keep reading more and more I just want the chapters to keep coming! The story just keeps getting more and more interesting with every chapter! I am constantly debating with myself whether or not to type a mile a minute to comment on every chapter or just continue on reading CUZ I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Bloody brilliant! Everything! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm seriously in love with the idea of this company Harry is creating. I'm so curious! I want the chapters to keep coming, on and on and on! That interaction with the Weasley family especially? Perfection! It made me bloody tear up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is super interesting! I came in without much expectation for once since I've been going bonkers for the past few hours trying to find an interesting enough, well written enough time travel fanfic to my standard. Reading this chapter, I'm completely curious! Intrigued! Harry completely opening up to a Goblin about his time traveling from the get-go was very unique and original. I like it. Controlling his relatives? Starting a company? BRILLIANT! I wanna see where you'll be taking this for sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mixed recommendations, but this story is majorly abandoned. |
![]() ![]() I would like to correct your german. What you said translates to: from within they can only fall. What you want to say is "nur von innen fallen" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok one think that has been bugging me you spell mooney it is spelt moony no ey |