| Reviews for Manipulating Fate |
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   PSTurner chapter 6 . 6/28/2007 Again, great story. Thanks Pam |
| PSTurner chapter 5 . 6/28/2007 Great chapter, Great writing. I have tears in my eyes with Harry's story. Look forward to reading more. Pam |
| Domique chapter 5 . 6/28/2007 update soon please good work |
| Lily's Secretkeeper chapter 5 . 6/28/2007 I love your story. I've been following it since chapter two... but I stopped reviewing stories about 5 months ago, so I never reviewed. Your story was just so good that I had to. Though, since you asked, the whole italics thing sort of bothers me. It's just reflex for me to think of it as a character's thoughts. Keep up the amazing work! Update soon! :] |
| Bratling chapter 5 . 6/28/2007 Since you asked... the italics are distracting. Usually, things like flashbacks are in italics, but not dialogue. I'm enjoying this, though. Please keep writing. |
| Energeezer chapter 5 . 6/28/2007 So he's not going to date other people meanwhile? |
| darkcelestial20 chapter 5 . 6/27/2007 i'm really enjoying the story. the story would flow better if you cut back on using Italics for dialog and just use it for Spells and Charms and possibly internal thoughts. |
| Bluesnowman chapter 5 . 6/27/2007 Great work. |
| rdg2000 chapter 4 . 6/27/2007 I am enjoying this little story very much. At first I thought it was going to be a condensed version of s'tarkan (or Viridian depending on what website you go to)'Harry Potter and the Nightmare of Futures Past' but you are showing that this is your own work. I wish your chapters were longer - But I can understand how hard it is to get anything writen out. Great story, I look forward to reading more about it. rdg |
| Airlady chapter 1 . 6/27/2007 Looks like a story worth reading. |
| PSTurner chapter 4 . 6/27/2007 Hey, I just found this story today, and I have to say, so far you are doing a great job. I was wondering if padfootrevenger has had a little influence on you. That would not be a bad thing at all. Look forward to more updates. Thanks for writing! Pam |
| Wolfric chapter 4 . 6/27/2007 How will Kreacher betray Harry now? It seems like it might have been a better move to eliminate someone you know is inclined to betray you. On the other hand Harry has his and Voldemort's memories; so he should be able to formulate a plan which accounts for that contingency. I like the story. Thanks for writing. W. |
| JenniferRSong chapter 4 . 6/26/2007 Question: Is all the spoken writing in the chapters *supposed* to be italized? I did like the chapter, by the way. Keep up the good work. So far, so good. |
| SwiftShadow chapter 1 . 6/26/2007 -sigh-... It's 'Avada Kedavra', if I'm not mistaken, not 'Avarda Kadavra'. I'm not trying to be mean... but if you're going to have Harry firing it at himself, at least spell it right? Please? |
| Hello.I'mMarySue chapter 4 . 6/26/2007 i like the last two chapters. verry good. i didnt mind kreacher in there. |