| Reviews for Manipulating Fate |
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   Bluesnowman chapter 4 . 6/26/2007 Great story so far. |
| GenkaiFan chapter 4 . 6/26/2007 Nice plotline. I am curious to see where you will go with it. A piece of advice. Ditch the italics in your conversations. It is unnessesary and very hard to read. Italics are usually used for thought and sometimes to stress a point. Forgive my typos. It's 4 am and I couldn't sleep. -GF |
| hemotem chapter 4 . 6/26/2007 Not bad at all thank you hope to see more soon. Hemotem |
| Matsuoka Eriru chapter 3 . 6/25/2007 Why do you use italics for dialouge? Well I lilked it and please update asap thank you good bye! |
| darkangelwp chapter 3 . 6/25/2007 awesome story so far. Please update soon. |
| RRW chapter 3 . 6/25/2007 This is wonderful. Can't wait for the next chapter. Question: What about Sirius? |
| jabarber69 chapter 3 . 6/25/2007 Man you got one hell of a story going here! I was floored when I started reading it and then he got to gringotts, the whole foundation ideal is quite superb as well as your writing. I just hope you can keep it going! |
| Wolfric chapter 3 . 6/25/2007 I have just read your story to this point and I like it. It seems like there would be a Potter property available; it seems like Sirius being alive might make access to Grimmauld Place more difficult. Seeing as how this is AU you can have it how you want it. Thanks for writing. I look forward to further installments. W. |
| darkcelestial20 chapter 3 . 6/24/2007 interesting story. wonder what's gona happen when harry gets to hogwarts. |
| JenniferRSong chapter 2 . 6/24/2007 Nice. Different. If you raise this story's rating, I'll have to discontinue it. I'd like to see how this one is different from the other "30-year-old Harry goes back in time" stories. See you. |
| Hello.I'mMarySue chapter 2 . 6/24/2007 i like this. im interested to see more. |
| RRW chapter 2 . 6/24/2007 Now this is a great beginning. It is much better than some of the other "time travel to save those who died" stories I have read. Can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I hope you finish this story because I have not read one that has been completed. But I have to admit yours is the most entertaining by far. |
| Matsuoka Eriru chapter 1 . 6/22/2007 You're crazy but update asap this is cool! |
| Alarith chapter 1 . 6/22/2007 A real exciting chapter. Stories in which Harry travels somehow back in time are my favorite ones. Im curious about what he will do in the past and what hell experience. Im looking forward to read the next chapter Alarith |