Good story. Are u gonna finish it?
You havrn't written anything for over 14yrs.
I hope u didn't die on us.
If you are dead R.I.P

That probably should have been given a little more thought!

Tbh if the war lasted that long the muggle government would had counter attack and blow stuff up! Probably would wipe every single person out.

He sould kick there asses beta bitch

This was such a AWESOME storyline to read.
The mind of a 30year old in a 11year old body.
Everything he has done upto this point has been rather shocking and surprising.
The knowledge he uses from the future to change the past is just wow.
I know this was your first story and you are to be rewarded for such a great work of Art.
It saddens me this story has not been updated in many years, but I have faith that someday you will return and continue writing.
I will look forward to it as I'm sure others will too.
Take care and be safe!

I'm the first reviewer for July. Yes!
So far, the story is intriguing and I love powerful Harry Potter stories.
I so can't wait to witness what Harry will be doing in this new timeline.
Onward I read.
Take care and be safe!

in the last section(where McGonagall is arguing with dumbdore and snivellus) McGonagall's behaviour was frighteningly similar to Fudge's

If you are wanting this to be more with the geological accurate to the British culture in your writing. we start nursery(kindergarten) at the age of 3-4 and don’t use words like Soccer we us the word football for the sport.

I'm sorry to say, this story just hasn't worked for me. The author has done a good job, but it just isn't clicking for me. I might revisit in the future and see how I feel then.

how did this get to 177k words with chapters like this

For some reason and in some way I don’t know, this story just seems weirdly unique to me. I liked the premise and though at times I feel as if some things are unnecessary, the story is still great overall. The only problem I have is the relationship between Harry, Remus, and Sirius; the way it’s written feels a bit weird to me, and Remus’ ‘inquisitions’ as I feel them to be, are also a bit too suspicious-like(is that a word?). There isn’t enough character interaction( so I think) to go into any further details about the other characters, but I still feel the dynamics are weird — maybe it’s ‘cause Harry is an adult pretending to be an 11 year old, maybe not.

But the weird/unique character dynamics is what I think is the reason for how I feel about the story — as said in the first sentence.

There are some clichés, but with the amount of fanfics out there, it’s kinda inevitable.

I hope nobody’s murdered you for not choosing H/G as a pairing, and that you’re in good health.

If ever you choose to delve back into fan fiction, I hope you’ll continue this story. I wish you lick in your future endeavors.

I just can't stand how a war torn, 31 year old, grown ass man acts like a fucking toddler. I mean...seriously, the shifting around while being chastised, the way he lets others walk all over him, all of it. Annoying as hell.

So far it's quite ingenious to put harry in a way that I have not seen before I think jk Rowling would be proud to read such a interesting depiction of her works in such a way that depicts him to be quite intelligent and wise. Wonderful work so far hope to see more of it
Phynaxum Perrilinean

I really won't you to update this story it's so good

Didn't expect the bestiality part here... Nagini was a human before so idk how it works, does she even remember being human?