Ya know this is the first explanation I've ever seen for how the Twins just automatically knew the Marauder map password and this was hella appreciated xD

Ayee adding nagini was a nice touch

Lmaooo all the caps and italicized words during snape's POV xD

I LOVE what you've done with this story so far! Hopefully you can update soon, cause this has a lot of potential.

Also, (this is MY opinion, so don't hold it against me) I think that if you aren't gonna pair Harry with Ginny, then you shouldn't at all, unless it's an OC, I can handle that :). Again, don't hold my opinion against me.

Anyways, I can't wait to see what Dumbledore does, and how Harry can manipulate him even more than he already has. I just LOVE Harry's story, and that Dumbledore believes him.

So, please pretty please with a charming Charms essay on top write the next chapter and upload it? I'll be following, so I'll know!

Thx,
Libra

Someone probably told you this in another review, but I'll just say it again.
Its actually spelled "Quidditch" not "Quittich". Not wanting to be mean or rude anything.

P.S. love where this story is going and whats happening so far!

Loved this, but Remus's nickname is spelled "Moony" not "Mooney". But someone probably already told you that.

Loved this chapter very much!

good sor

this... its so dumb. why is voldemort not dead yet? really. this is worse than those wankfics where the MC is secretly Merlin who is actually a god and has a harem full of women and owns hogwarts.

these kinds of stories always get annoying with the MC's sharing all their secrets, and the people they share them with always act entitled to those secrets.

Hopefully MC goes after the philosophers stone, learns how to make one himself, or improves upon the concept. Maybe a single dose elixir, instead of needing repeated doses.

WHY!? why would you write this?
MC exposes a REALLY useful potion to a group of childred and snape, children of death eaters too. You do this before voldemort is dealt with, exposing yourself to him, before his last horcrux or quirrel are dealt with... This is just... GAH!

MC needs to deal with the horcruxes instead of screwing around with a company. Also, this story is going straight to trash if he actually tries dating Ginny.

SOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooo DUMB!
It's things like this that borderline kill stories/fanfics for me. Where the MC/Author just up and decides to share ALL their secrets at the drop of a hat with just about everyone. Because there is no way that could possibly go wrong. I mean, Seriously!? Have you even heard of the words Operational Security!?

super cringey. I mean... really?
Also, why not just nip voldemort in the bud. You know where ALL the horcuxes are. So get them. There's the ring, which is easy, the Locket, which is also easy as there is no fidelius up yet and you are a black (grandmother Dorea) and Sirius's godson. There is the Diadem, which should be easy with all the hidden tunnels into hogwarts, unless you want to put it off. There is the cup, which gringotts would very likely help with as it would, in a sense, be someone in their vault without permission. Which is a break-in.
Then there is the diary, which should also be easy given how little MC seems to care about the unforgivables, as well as how easily he should be able to bypass the house wards with his knowledge.
The only ones left would be nagini, who is not a horcrux yet, his scar, which may or may not be one in this story, and quirrel, who is easily dealt with.

why use the imperious? they're muggles... they have NO defenses. Just use a confundus, or legillimency and rewrite them.