Reviews for Manipulating Fate
Guest chapter 31 . 8/16/2020
Update please? Or is this really abandoned?
SRK chapter 15 . 8/12/2020
I can't believe this...plagiarism... Yes exactly... You just modified it a bit but basically you re write Altered Destinies by Dobyelflord. Including the bat form and multiple forms of animagus... At least it's finished and yours not...!
mumphie chapter 31 . 8/1/2020
Well, it's been twelve years since you posted. So, I can take a good guess that you won't be back. ;)
It's a good story idea, interesting and intriguing.
Perhaps you would consider updating with a summary of what you wanted to happen? How did Harry expect to get the horcrux/soul leach out of his scar? How was he going to deal with Quirrel? Were you going to allow his company to continue? Were you going to let Sirius and Remus live? Why didn't Harry want to try to rekindle his love with Ginny? He might not get HIS twins back, but they could still have children. There are so many question, but I'll leave it here.
AliceBridger chapter 31 . 7/26/2020
YOU PROMISED!
Goodness, this is a damn great story. I suppose begging for another chapter would be futile, wouldn't it?
Well, I'll try anyway. Pleeeaaaseee!
rigger42 chapter 5 . 6/13/2020
I'm hoping he forfeits the relationship and maybe some of the friendships change because...he's 30
Azure Shine chapter 4 . 6/4/2020
aww i wish harry be kind to kreacher and kreacher too. he is my fav character. i know kreacher in canon but hope it kreacher after he is become good elf, well, it okay for ooc too at last kreacher not be bashing/hurting with action or verbal
Midknight85 chapter 3 . 5/25/2020
This seems like a very good story and I truly hope that you have a chance to finish it as soon as you can.
Peace
adriana.schroor chapter 23 . 5/24/2020
Hello,

I am dutch and i think you wanted to talk about 'balans' and not 'saldo' as saldo is used in finances and not as in balance of good and evil. I just wanted to point this out to you, and if i'm wrong you van ignore this.
Guest chapter 31 . 4/13/2020
You know I just recently read this book and I would urge you to continue writing, no pressure at all, but it is a really good book. I think it is like the best book I have read and it is a shame you stopped writing it. Though, it was published and updated a long time ago... Best of luck in what you decide to do. Sorry if this message is offensive... :D
Maheshvara10 chapter 31 . 3/6/2020
This is One of the best Harry potter fanfiction I ever read. Thank you author. I hope you update this story.
Goddess of Darkness and Misery chapter 31 . 1/12/2020
Hi! I love this story. If it is possible, please update soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2019
Yikes. This is such unbelievably naive writing.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/13/2019
Why didn't Fabian reveal himself to his family at least when voldy vaniahed?
Bronze chapter 11 . 11/2/2019
Wonderful! Though, personally, I see Fumblemort as darker than Riddle ever thought to be. Just look at everything he did to Harry personally! Then in first year alone, he brings the Philosophers' Stone into the school! A school for god's sake! As for the traps, WHAT A JOKE! No, the man's so dark he makes Riddle look like the lightest light wizard to ever exist!
Bronze chapter 9 . 11/2/2019
Please, I don't mean to sound snotty but you made a slight mistake with a phrase in this chapter. Fabian is either a PROBLEM-SOLVER OR TROUBLE-SHOOTER. To the best of my knowledge, there is no such thing as a PROBLEM-SHOOTER. Also, I'm totally enjoying this story.
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