Hello, I just wanted to tell you how very much I am enjoying reading your Wonderful story. I see that the story is not finished, that is the bad part about reading fanfiction so many stories are never finished. Hopefully one day you can come back and finish writing this one. Until then Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us, and Take care.

This is so good and unfortunately like all great fanfictions it will never be completed... why is that?
Do good Author's have a secret society and get together to write great stories and don't complete them
99% of completed stories suck and 100% of the really good ones are abandoned! Hope you read this one day and leave that secret society and finish this story

So sorry beautiful story, and I’m like over 10 years late... but ‘downtown’ London isn’t called downtown. There is Central London and with in the centre the City which is a finance business bit. Old victorian factory’s would/could have been 6/7 stories high- and had fire places inside- also 16 stories would draw a lot of attention in the 90s I think although not sure. Very sorry- nit picking is not nice- but kind of assumed you’re American or at least not from London? Extra apologies if that is incorrect. Anyhow love the story and that Fabian is alive never seen anyone else do that in fanfic world :)

This is THE BEST fanfiction I have ever seen in my entire life! Great job and PLEASE update as soon as possible! Thank you!
P.S. I think that if you wanted, you could be an awesome author one day! ;)

Hi, as a native from the Netherlands I felt the need to correct a sentence I found. Mei is dutch for the month May and cannot be used like that. Gaat is not conjugated right. The right sentence would be: Mag alles gaan zoals gepland.
Ik hoop dat dit geholpen heeft.

that was interesting, I don't think I have read that twist before in any of the Harry fanfics I have read. I do like that there is minmal to no bashing of characters, I usually hate that stuff. I just hope that Harry wont be trying to keep every event at Hogwarts as the same ones he remembers, that always blows up in everyones faces.

well the spell sounds like rancid ass sweat, but I quite like Harry with 30 years of experience and with 60 years of voldemort in his head, should make for an interesting read. go-go-imperius power.

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poor draco his trap just blew up in his face

a lot the past 'manipulations' in prev chaps remind me of the saying u can lead a horse to water but u cant make it drink and the one's in this chapter are kinda understandable since if harry ahd been frank and forthright with remus if his reaction is anything like me would likely have been I would have thought he was totally off his rocker most likely

Like it. More sophisticated approach.

Looking forward to rest

Well, it’s 10 years later, still a good story. If you were writing this as a ‘youth’ then you write well. Your dialogue between characters is realistic and age appropriate...even Harry when speaking to Neville and sounding like a parent. I hope you actually do finish it because I’m really curious as to what Harry’s plan is! Is he trying to get the Headmaster to think he’s a Horcrux? And that Harry has to die?
I’m assuming that Harry is planning to use the Dark Mark to kill the Dark Lord, and the Horcrux and the followers. So, my question is: can Harry use his empathy and be able to determine which followers would rather not follow and which can’t wait for his return, and then either strip the magic of the ones who did a lot of bad things but weren’t lost to depravity, or reduce it so they can still live, and free any who were protesting silently wherever they could help? Or like Severus? And, if he can follow the Mark, will he find Regulus alive, or changed?
So many options and possibilities.

Well done. Also, your chapters can be shorter, then you won’t have to work so hard to produce one. Normal chapters in books run from 1 word, but normally between 3 and 6 thousand words. Novellas start at 10,000 words and short novels start around 21000 words. Like the old dime store paperbacks. They topped out at 25,000.

Your "description" of magical intercom legitimately made me laugh, who needs to know how it works so long as it does it's job :D

This story is great I hope you update it one day

I know you have not updated for a long time, but I hope you will some day. This is an absolutely brilliant story! I eagerly await the next update! Hopefully...