Reviews for Manipulating Fate |
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![]() ![]() Well, that was excellent. Please do post the next chapter quickly. Love your story. It's different from other Time travel stories, but oh so much better... Absolutely love it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great story. I really like the idea of the foundation. It’s nice to see Harry taking care of some of the things that the rest of the Wizarding world won’t. I think his manipulations of people are definitely worthy of a Slytherin. Thank you so much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! The company was a brilliant idea and I’m really curious about Harry’s plan! I wish there was more. I know it’s been a decade since you last updated and mentioned a rewrite on your bio, but will you be coming back? I hope you are well and I want to thank you for this cool fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! I'm Dutch and I just wanna say that the English-Dutch translations aren't really correct, some words are translated literally which makes the sentences look weird (to me at least). "Welk saldo?" should be changed to "Welke balans?" and "Mei alles gaat zoals gepland" should be changed to "Mag alles gaan zoals gepland". I'm sorry if I accidently made myself sound mean, I didn't mean to insult or offend or anything like that. I just wanted to tell you the correct translations so it's a bit more accurate. |
![]() ![]() Boring. First few chapters were great then it all went hogwash |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really amazing story. I hope you decide to come back and continue it. |
![]() ![]() You didn't mark this story as a harry/ginny one. I hope it won't be as I just cant stand that pairing; there was no justification for it in canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m amazed at authors who put so much into a story and then right in the middle of it they drop off the face of the earth. This is a really great story that has so much promise. I loved the scene in Albus’ office! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing that he's not getting back with Ginny because of a) her dying in the previous timeline, or more likely b) the odds of his twins being born is so astronomically small that it would just be a constant reminder of the heartbreak. As for a nontraditional pairing with a girl who we haven't seen yet... I'm going to guess Susan Bones. That's a fairly uncommon pair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() But it’s a conniption fit. I’ve had a few of them too. I’m a Bama girl so I speak fluent hick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When he went to talk to the counselor, why didn't anyone suggest a physical? Chronic malnutrition and his mismatched glasses could be treated and catalogued as evidence against the Dursleys. |
![]() ![]() Please continue this. This fanfic is really good and I enjoy your writing, but if it's abandoned can you tell us... thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 26 chapters in and im sorry i've only reviewed once but you write amazingly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! YOU ARE AMAZING! |