Reviews for Manipulating Fate
Anonymous chapter 31 . 1/29/2019
Well, that was excellent.
Please do post the next chapter quickly.
Love your story.
It's different from other Time travel stories, but oh so much better...
Absolutely love it...
SunPho3n1x chapter 31 . 1/16/2019
This is such a great story. I really like the idea of the foundation. It’s nice to see Harry taking care of some of the things that the rest of the Wizarding world won’t. I think his manipulations of people are definitely worthy of a Slytherin. Thank you so much for writing this.
SilverDragon1218 chapter 31 . 11/30/2018
This is great! The company was a brilliant idea and I’m really curious about Harry’s plan! I wish there was more. I know it’s been a decade since you last updated and mentioned a rewrite on your bio, but will you be coming back? I hope you are well and I want to thank you for this cool fic.
not-short-nor-adorable chapter 23 . 11/29/2018
Hi there! I'm Dutch and I just wanna say that the English-Dutch translations aren't really correct, some words are translated literally which makes the sentences look weird (to me at least).
"Welk saldo?" should be changed to "Welke balans?" and "Mei alles gaat zoals gepland" should be changed to "Mag alles gaan zoals gepland".
I'm sorry if I accidently made myself sound mean, I didn't mean to insult or offend or anything like that. I just wanted to tell you the correct translations so it's a bit more accurate.
Guest chapter 27 . 11/28/2018
Boring. First few chapters were great then it all went hogwash
ReDEAR chapter 31 . 11/22/2018
This is a really amazing story. I hope you decide to come back and continue it.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/8/2018
You didn't mark this story as a harry/ginny one. I hope it won't be as I just cant stand that pairing; there was no justification for it in canon.
Ducky1776 chapter 31 . 10/21/2018
I’m amazed at authors who put so much into a story and then right in the middle of it they drop off the face of the earth. This is a really great story that has so much promise. I loved the scene in Albus’ office!
timberwolfst chapter 31 . 10/19/2018
I'm guessing that he's not getting back with Ginny because of a) her dying in the previous timeline, or more likely b) the odds of his twins being born is so astronomically small that it would just be a constant reminder of the heartbreak.

As for a nontraditional pairing with a girl who we haven't seen yet... I'm going to guess Susan Bones. That's a fairly uncommon pair.
Ducky1776 chapter 21 . 10/18/2018
But it’s a conniption fit. I’ve had a few of them too. I’m a Bama girl so I speak fluent hick.
timberwolfst chapter 13 . 10/17/2018
When he went to talk to the counselor, why didn't anyone suggest a physical? Chronic malnutrition and his mismatched glasses could be treated and catalogued as evidence against the Dursleys.
Guest chapter 31 . 9/1/2018
Please continue this. This fanfic is really good and I enjoy your writing, but if it's abandoned can you tell us... thanks!
ProdigyReading chapter 26 . 8/28/2018
26 chapters in and im sorry i've only reviewed once but you write amazingly!
Amu4ever chapter 31 . 8/23/2018
Well, looking forward to more!
Amu4ever chapter 26 . 8/20/2018
Oh my gosh! YOU ARE AMAZING!
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