Reviews for Failure
MaiAkikoChan chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Hahahahahahahahah that was HILARIOUS! Great fic!
LovableDuck chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
this is really good. i especially loved shinji's mumbling. )
The Blue Penguin chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
That was a very nice concept and you portrayed it nicely too. - I liked the conversation between Chitose and Shinji. It was a wonderful read. Well, I like reading stories like these anyway. -

I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but they were very minimal. You sometimes shift from past to present, and use 'then' when you should be using 'than'. Anyway, aside from that, the was nicely done.. -

Good job!
ketchupblood chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
That was really nicely written, I think. . I've totally forgotten how to characterize Fudomine. Meh. I do love your entire conversation, though.

Meaning that I loved your fic. -