|Reviews for snow powder|
| xXxSoulKeeperxXx chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
XD Last sentence of the whole thing amazing.
Because of the randomness.
Yeah this was a cute fanfiction, really shows the friendship-like love between them.
Y'know the love what ony friends can share between each other, yeah that kinda friendship-love :D.
So cute X3.
| BecauseHeroesNeverDie chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
I thought this was very cute! I love the idea. I can see Hayner and Roxas running in the snow. The idea is true to the story and everyone is in character.
A little advice: Try to describe things a little more clearly. Also, read over your work for tense consistency. To improve sentence structure try reading your writing aloud to see if anything sounds awkward.
| Nobody-XV chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
i also love roxas and hayners friendship. i just cant stand it when writers take it another step to yaoi. then it just gets annoying when the characters are so abviously NOT GAY. please keep writing!
| doyoufeellikeyourfallingdown chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
i love you so much for writing this
i was in desperate need of some Roxas/Hanyer love!
| sorceress115 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
| Ettelo chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Instant favorite! I love your characterization of the both of them and the way you highlighted the difference between the way they each laugh. Perfect.
| time can take its toll chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
"She looks down and meets the sight of two pairs of footsteps, crazily zigzagging in peculiar patterns. She sighs. Boys will be boys.
And she jogs after their footsteps."
That is. That's so cute. Greatest ending. :3
(I posted one for you. Hope you like it. :D)
*Faves this TOO* :D
| Broken Angel01 chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
I agree, the fandom definitely needs more friendship fics! And I love the friendship between Roxas and Hayner myself, so of course this is going on my favorites list.
Nice to it from Olette's POV too!