Reviews for The Make Up
nobody's listenin chapter 3 . 6/20/2006
You're a pretty bad writer, but, sadly, you probably have the best Save the Last Dance fanfic out.
Guitarprincess chapter 2 . 1/30/2005
this is so slammin!
OTHlover04 chapter 3 . 12/8/2004
sorry, no suggestions. this is a good story.
singingbella chapter 3 . 11/1/2004
Why dont u talk about issues that they have, or mayba have Derek stay with Sara in the apartment, and then her dad come home and freak, or a pregnancy scare or sumtin like that

good luck!
OliviabensonSVU4 chapter 2 . 6/8/2004
yay-ness! Its awesome! Update soon! Yipee! :)
SavetheLastDanceFan chapter 3 . 12/9/2003
hey, i love it so far... i think u could write when theyre at college appart and how they have a relationship and stuff. k? UPDATE SOON!
sweet-love16 chapter 3 . 11/27/2003
how about you write about sarah and derik maybe you can let me say have a great time at each toerha dn met each other anywhere where juliard is and where his school is!
glitzydancingshoes chapter 3 . 8/30/2003
i thought that this was grand. Its geennre was very good and your plot was interesting. Keep it up this was brill!
awtrfan4eva chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
Awesum.. ya u read mine so i read urs;) its freaky cuz we both have a titanic and stld one..:)
x3 baby james x3 chapter 3 . 2/12/2003
great story! i luv it! hmm...how bout their tiem in college and what they do together
CarebearKara chapter 3 . 12/27/2002
when i have writer's block it's usually just for one story because i keep getting ideas but i like what you've written so far.
Becky chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
It was awesome that Derrick and Sara made up. They look so cute together. It was nice of Derrick to go to Sara's tryouts. I know that Derrick and Sara will never break up again. Malachi and Nikki will try to break Derrick and Sara up, but it will never work. It was so cute when Derrick kissed Sara when she was asking him why did he go to the tryouts. Nikki will always be jelious of Sara because Sara got Derrick as a boyfriend and she doesn't. Someday, Malacki will become Sara's friend.
sarah chapter 3 . 9/4/2002
ok great so far, !

right what next...well you could have

how well there both doing maybe sara has probs with other jelous students!

And derrick maybe struggleing a bit with the work?that would give em summit to talk about with each summit could happen to chris forsing them to come home and comfort chanile!say meningitos or mumps?ok well not great ideas but at least its a start!hope it helps.
Sarah chapter 1 . 8/13/2002
Great great great...i loved it..plz do some more...i would love to keep up ont his story that u have going!

*!*sarie*!*
icess America chapter 3 . 8/3/2002
I'm a fellow writer of Sara and Dereck. When my Second chapter gets up read it the comes insperation
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