|Reviews for Leir's Story|
| HeadlessHorseman chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
i really liked how you switched between Leir and his mate and foal, it added a nice twist.
The only thing that i didnt really like was the way you chose to color the unicorns. Some of the things you described were difficult for me to imagine.
However that is only my opinion, and your story is bright and imaginative. I like it and enjoyed it.
| Airezi chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Very nice story, I love the flashbacks intermingled with the battle scenes. You have great imagery in your scenes, it's easy to see what is happening! Good!