Reviews for Not Forever
Lovegranted chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
*truly crying now* why? all these sad stories... but this one is quite remarkable as well... [runs away to grab kleenex] I really like it!
loove it chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
so...Beautiful! I love the last one

"if my promise you can't trust

I will still not go away

If my bones break into dust

I'll still haunt you all the way..." and the part before that

"and somewhere, among the wind, he heard a little laugh, or perhaps some singing, just soft enough to reach his ears, so far away he wondered if he didn't imagine it all." those two parts just fit so good together...
Dreaming Celestine chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I nearly cried It was so well done 3 How you slowly revealed the information... god... so good. *sniffs* Now I feel all warm and bubbly inside, and my eyes are all watery ; ; Well... a lovely story. And I'm going to save this... and probably come back to it in a while and get all teary again XD
xMitsuko chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
That was brilliant. Not your typical happy-go-lucky GP story, definately a good change. It was a bit sad, but I loved it.

The last few lyrics were a bit dark for Eiji, and I somehow can't see him saying them, song or not.

Anyways, great story! I really loved it.
ShilaDrakedeleted chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
A... (speechless)WOW...This is so beautiful.

So GoldenPair like and yet so sad.

I can't stop reading it again and again.

Thanks for writing it.
Just Jill chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
That was beautiful.

Thanks for sharing!

Just Jill
GintaxAlvissForever chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Me: So sad...