|Reviews for A Day in the Life|
| Jane's Mockingjay chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
nice job. Very funny, very true to the spirit of the comics.
| 12122012 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
| Jessica01 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
I could so see this as a comic.
| P.M.Hall chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
That was pretty funny, I was hoping to see Paige's torture techniques, but I guess that will come in later chapters.
| SD chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
I read the the news today, oh boy...
Sorry, couldn't resist that line xD
Anyway, interesting fic here. I love how chaotic the whole thing is.
| Deleted Inspiration chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Its really funny!
| Espionne chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
A humorous, comical depiction of the Fox family up to their usual antics. Being an avid reader of the Foxtrot comics myself, I found this story to be very cute and descriptive. The use of magazine/band names, such as 'Vogue' and 'Backsync Boys', made Paige in particular quite believable.
Just a few minor things I wanted to point out:
-A young boy with bright blond hair loaded his gun, looking to his friend, who had dark skin and black hair.
This could be condensed into a slightly more concise sentence. Consider: "A short, blond boy loaded his gun as he looked at his dark-skinned friend."
-"Ready?" he murmured.
"As ever," he muttered back.
The use of 'he' twice makes it a bit confusing as to who is Jason and who is Marcus.
Overall, however, as I mentioned before, this is a great piece that shows the true colors of the crazed, slightly insane Fox family. Good job on this piece and write on! :)
| General nazor chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
What the heck?
| GinnyWazlibRocks chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
nice. please continue!