Reviews for The Good Fight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was certainly a twist. So it wasn’t Snape. It was Harry? But damn. How old are Ron and Harry here? Great story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful, sad and made me “ooohhh”” in understanding. Great job. Though I need a continuation! Plss |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was heartbreaking |
![]() ![]() Wow |
![]() ![]() Goddamnit that was good ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS REALLY GOOD. |
![]() ![]() That was amazingly well written. I enjoyed reading it very much. Please make a sequel to it with a caring overprotective Ron. I love when Ron is protective if Harry. Mayve have the other family members slowly realize they're leaving out Ron. It could start with bill and Charlie realizing he's not with the group when Harry asks them where Ron. They can realize how often Ron is on the outside of the group and when he tries to join in the conversation or go something with his family (like someone if they want to play chess) he is outright rejected. They can find Ron and ask him if he wants to play chess **rons face lights up and gets really excited asking them are they sure, can we play now etc etc** Charlie and bill realize how ostracized Ron feels and try to bring about change in the Wesley family. Sorry that got out of fans but I hope you write something like that but I understand if that's super demanding and you don't want to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... This is amazing! It's so emotional and sad! |
![]() ![]() Poignant and beautifully written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Very well written. It brought me to tears. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where in the world is the rest of this story? ._. well it reads really well when paired with the song Hope Volume 2 by Apocalyptica |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my God... so good and so sad... wow... wonderfully well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I did guess that the child was Harry when he was younger, though I didn't realise it could be a boggart. I wondered whether it was Harry's magic that had taken corperal form to allow him to get past his experiences. I wonder what Ron's reaction would be after this? Will you do a sequel to show the reactions? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliantly written. Just fantastic. |