Oh, why don't you update this? You have a plan, or at least I think so from what your summary said! This is so well-written, so thought-out, and Ron being jealous of Harry doesn't come across as bashing at all, just light angst. I love how it's Snape first, then the boggart... I never saw that coming... this is so well-written and great that I really wish that you would continue, I really do... please! I also like your other story... blanking on the title. Harry, dead... *sobs*. But this is such a great plot, I wish you'd update! please!

Love, Echoing Noisr

Will you do another one of these stories? Your ones are very good, maybe you could do a sequel to The Good Fight? Please, they're really good!

I really liked the ending of this one, it's a real shocker for Ron, thinking all those thoughts about his friend, and then realising his friend had it really bad.

This fanfiction always makes me want to cry. Will you write another one about this? Please? It's really good, and I think it really is fabby and you should share your writing talents with the world.

wow, that story really has an inpact. i needed t read the end a few times to really fully understand it. i liked the angst, usally i don't like ron angest but this was good. perfectly balenced with the harry abuse. although harry's fear just isn't very clear. Is he afriad of not being loved? Giving up? if your even reading this review, i would like to know what your vision was for his fear. great job in total.

This was written very powerfully and I loved it!

Brillant that was just...Brillant.

that was absolutly amazing. You have some major talent!

Very interesting indeed! Well done.

awesome. i think you should write a sequel! :-) please!

i don't understand this. is harry's childhood his greatest fear? why would it be if he was comforting the child? i've definitely lost some key piece here.

that aside, i really liked it. really. i think it would have been interesting if you could've tied the claustrophobia in with the fear of spiders. i liked the description of ron's feelings- it was a little excessively angsty, but i think it's a very plausible side of ron. good job.

that was so touching !

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poor harry! why does he have to go through so much?

i loved the way he reacted to the boggart-kid though .. that was cute.

This is a really nice one-shot. I figured it was a boggart, especially since I thought that Ron wasn't really aware of the extent of Harry's abuse inside the house of the Dursleys.

You shoudl write a sequel for this. Great job!

I doesnt make sense to me. Sorry. Its well writen though.

COT

Brilliant. The emotions were captured so perfectly. The ending was amazing.

That was really good! Very well written. I guessed it might be a boggart, because how would a real child have gotten in there... but it still sent chills down my spine.