Reviews for The Good Fight
PutMoneyInThyPurse chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Absolutely speechless.

What a last line. Wow.

Will probably be coming back for a re-read because, like a murder mystery, this is probably going to give up its secrets on the second reading.

oh...

It isn't fair, but sometimes the best stories are the ones that leave you speechless. My heart broke for Ron, being just another redhead, at the beginning, and the knowledge-recognition of Harry and the boggart. What a gut-punch surprise. The Snape red herring was a stroke of genius. it's hard to surprise anyone in this fandom, and you have done just that. Ron's PoV is tight and flawless and very him. I will probably be coming back to this again, but... wow. *Wow.*
nonymousmae chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
I love it.

i should really think about a sequel if you haven't written one already.
Seeker of Solitude chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
OMG that is so sad.
angel-721 chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
HI COLETTE! ITS CYNTHIA! (:

ah that was really good!

you should check out my stories (:
HermioneWatsonFan chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Its really, really good, but you should have made the scene longer - rons reaction to realizing that the child/boggart was harry.
Amister chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Well, it was a good ending ... so good I want u to continue! lol. It really was good.
sheltiesoph chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
I love it! SO sad, very original. I absolutely adored it.

But make sure you change how you can't accept anonymous reviews! You'd get so much more and you deserve them!
Atrandom chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
Although I usually don't like Abused!Harry, I thought this was a pretty good one-shot. It's well-written and I like the perspective (jealous Ron who finds out why he shouldn't be).
sruti chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
This is so well written!

You're a star.
harry.is.a.brave.fool chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
I don't get it... Does this mean harry was abused as a child? Or that Snape was his father? sorry, it's well written but i just didn't understand what was going on.
delete2011 chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
hm...I can never tell what Ron's real personality is like. Sometimes I would think this is perfectly accurate, but I also think it might be a bit overboard. Is Ron really that insanely jealous? I think he'd be a bit less, but I don't know. Great story anyway.
Invisible Nick chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Amazing story, I loved it!
lilyandjames2790 chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Whoa. I...just...Whoa. That was realy interesting! Extremely well written too. Very sad though...poor Harry... :-( Excellent piece of work!
Criminally Insane Hermit chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Oh my God! That was so good! Your style of writing is just so... I'm not entirley sure how to describe it, but I suppose that makes it all the better. Anyhow, it works, and that's what matters.
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