Reviews for The Good Fight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely speechless. What a last line. Wow. Will probably be coming back for a re-read because, like a murder mystery, this is probably going to give up its secrets on the second reading. oh... It isn't fair, but sometimes the best stories are the ones that leave you speechless. My heart broke for Ron, being just another redhead, at the beginning, and the knowledge-recognition of Harry and the boggart. What a gut-punch surprise. The Snape red herring was a stroke of genius. it's hard to surprise anyone in this fandom, and you have done just that. Ron's PoV is tight and flawless and very him. I will probably be coming back to this again, but... wow. *Wow.* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. i should really think about a sequel if you haven't written one already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG that is so sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HI COLETTE! ITS CYNTHIA! (: ah that was really good! you should check out my stories (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its really, really good, but you should have made the scene longer - rons reaction to realizing that the child/boggart was harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it was a good ending ... so good I want u to continue! lol. It really was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! SO sad, very original. I absolutely adored it. But make sure you change how you can't accept anonymous reviews! You'd get so much more and you deserve them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Although I usually don't like Abused!Harry, I thought this was a pretty good one-shot. It's well-written and I like the perspective (jealous Ron who finds out why he shouldn't be). |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so well written! You're a star. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get it... Does this mean harry was abused as a child? Or that Snape was his father? sorry, it's well written but i just didn't understand what was going on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm...I can never tell what Ron's real personality is like. Sometimes I would think this is perfectly accurate, but I also think it might be a bit overboard. Is Ron really that insanely jealous? I think he'd be a bit less, but I don't know. Great story anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story, I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. I...just...Whoa. That was realy interesting! Extremely well written too. Very sad though...poor Harry... :-( Excellent piece of work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God! That was so good! Your style of writing is just so... I'm not entirley sure how to describe it, but I suppose that makes it all the better. Anyhow, it works, and that's what matters. |