Reviews for Unseen
Cutiecat chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Aww, well, that's sad! Poor girl! How could it be that no one at all notices her? And then later for her to be killed by the child she raised? That's terrible! D
Shadsie chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Hey, it was crack, but it was some good crack! Quite the imagination there. Poor Ghoma.
A raging Ghost chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
XD

wow I never would've actually guessed that...

seriously, finally deciding to read this and damn

good job :D
SomeMisguidingName chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
very descriptive and unique. beautifully written.

kutos
The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Hawk...dang, I want more from you now.

That was just too good. Too creative. Too...well-written. Man, I loved it. So descriptive, so original, so gripping.

Beautiful, really. *faves*
koiia-halo chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Odd pairing indeed but I liked the change of the cliche pairings.
Admiral Andalite chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
My first guess was Navi, but I guess not. I did briefly consider a non-monstrous Gohma, but the thought passed.

Just one problem. Gohma is the name of those little spiders, not the name of the Queen. Just thought you should know.
Funkitated chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Loved it! Certainly unconventional, but well worth the read. The best part was probably that it was so wacky while simultaneously being a well written story.
hns1387 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
brilliant! i'll admit the pairing was wacky, but this is really creative and unique. good job
Truth Questor chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Certainly creative and original. Well-written, too, and tragic. I was trying to guess the pairing all along, but my guess turned out to be wrong.
ZombieDragon chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
wow...that was a cracky pairing... XD

Nice one shot though!
Poupou-pidou chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
Wow. You sure aren't kidding when you say it's the "crackiest pairing ever".

So sad it ended up like this for Gohma.

I wonder, was Gohma a material being before she was transformed by Ganondorf? Or was she just a spirit hovering invisible in the air?

Anyway, I truly liked that story :D