Reviews for The Underground Groundhog
Lady of the Dawn 01 chapter 4 . 9/26/2013
This chapter was great!
Lady of the Dawn 01 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Great background story! Are you a fan of Lord of the Rings?
Lady of the Dawn 01 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Okay I am going to Goodwill to get that statue! :D great chapter
Eoril chapter 4 . 3/5/2013
I like the story so far, update please? :)
anon chapter 3 . 2/22/2010
after a prolog and 2 chapters, I'm seeing a pattern here:

Show, don't tell
maskedpainter chapter 4 . 11/11/2007
hey i'm reading and i love this story!

i would have reviewed but was getting ready for a class so i didn't have time but its very intresting i'm intriged and i want more please!

~MP
aeenc chapter 4 . 11/10/2007
your backstory has been really good. There were quite a few typos and missing words throughout but otherwise very good.
notwritten chapter 4 . 11/9/2007
I like your story. It is very good.
Sparkling Moon Phoenix chapter 3 . 11/9/2007
Thanks for the background information! Good work!
Sparkling Moon Phoenix chapter 4 . 11/9/2007
That was a lovely chapter; a few spelling mistakes, but I ignored those as I was wrapped in the chapter!
notwritten chapter 3 . 10/16/2007
A very interesting chapter. More chapters please, and soon. :-)
aeenc chapter 3 . 10/16/2007
yay! excited for the next one!
aeenc chapter 2 . 8/9/2007
yay! Weird, this chapter looks so much smaller when posted. I skimmed through and it looks like you caught all the previous typos. Can't wait for more hun!
BunniGirl chapter 2 . 8/9/2007
Interesting. I like the concept; I did almost think that it was going to be Jareth reliving the entire Labyrinth experience over and over while Sarah tried to solve it - he had to convince her ultimately of his love for her, change as a ruler, etc.

Still I want to see where you're going with this. Thanks for the history and better yet the set up for Sarah's life. Thanks for posting and update soon. :)

-BG
notwritten chapter 2 . 8/8/2007
This chapter is the same as the first one.
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