Reviews for Idiocy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great introspections. They were well done. I was excited to see that you had written something for Bleach. I'm a tad bit surprised you are undecided about your pairings. I would think something like Ichiruki would be up your alley lol Anyway, you did a great job capturing Ichigo and Renji's thoughts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your Zero/Yuki perspective trilogy and recently I've become a big Ichigo/Rukia shipper so reading this was a nice treat. Again you've done an exceptional job displaying seemingly realistic portrayals of the characters inner emotions. |
![]() ![]() I absolutely loved both accounts. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not too short. If it had been longer, it would have been ruined. As it is, you preserved the emotions perfectly and got them through without a hitch. Beautiful work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well that was nice in a manner of speaking...if only you had a few dialogues in there ...it would have been perfect... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd never be ashamed of posting anything if it were as well written as this. A very nice addition to Idiocy and again I love the last line! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! Such strong denial and the end is wonderful. I was always fascinated by her sleeping in his closet and though this is the first Bleach fanfict I've read I love that you touch upon such a curious thing. Again, very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I have recently been swayed towards Renji and Rukia...And this is amazing! So cute... |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story. Poor boys, what will they do? lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! So adorable. I can't think up an intelligent commentary, but you expressed them perfectly- all of them Good show! -Silence |
![]() ![]() I love Ichiruki but...Renji's chapter really broke my heart! OH WHY CAN'T ICHIGO AND RENJI SHARE RUKIA? I WANT BOTH OF THEM TO BE HAPPY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw... kawaii... sweet... make a rukia chappie... good work... so sweet... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Poor Renji. He seems so sappy here...which is how he really is on the inside, I bet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was INCREDIBLE. Breathtaking in it's honesty and simplicity...I am utterly blown away. The perfect portrayal of Ichigo. Just...wow. Great writing, great thoughts, great everything. Wow. I can't even compose my thoughts, I'm that impressed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, What do ya know,? THERE BOTH IDIOTS! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHO lol Yeah! I really like it :) The reflection between Rukia, from the perspective of two Idiot XD Hope You post more Love the insight, and perspective and all :) |