Reviews for Force
riddiculusvampire chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
This is great! You see, this is exactly what I wanted to happen in New Moon! (even though I want edward to myself) This is going on my favs! Great work!
Mew mew luvr chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Can you read my mind? i was about to wright a story about Bella asking Edward to kill her. I even acted it out. that sounded corny so i will just say that it was a really good story and hope you don't read my review.
Kat chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
This was a great concept, but I think it lacked in detail and was very OOC. Your grammar could have been improved greatly, as well. In general, I think that with the help of a beta and some tweaks to the dialogue, this could be a good piece of fic.
blackirises chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
i liked it. it was a little short, and i think edward proly would have held out for a little longer, but it was really good. tehehe. isn't it amazing what you come up with during writers block?

poe
SpottedLilly chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
I love it, it made me cry but at the same time it was awesome! It's intresting that she got powers at a time like that, but made it even better.
babieblue chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
it's very sweet i liked that he didnt leave
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