Reviews for Rewind
starryeyes12 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
great story
mirandamag chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
I wish it would have ended like that! great job! :)
starryeyes10 chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
great story.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
I most certainly appreciate your ending over the series one! Theirs was awful! Jack balanced out Annabeth. He was her anchor and voice of reason.

This was a short story but pretty well done. Good job! :)
lor4eto chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
I like it.
Pysch13 chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
Black! Its DragonSkull13! I never watched this show but great job! Especially for your first fanfic!
Jennyferr chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
AH! I'm your first review. Alright, here goes:

Okay, first thing I noticed, second paragraph. Finally, she made it. Suddenly she slowed down. Kind of too many finally, suddenly words. If you get what I'm saying. Not bad, though. Just try to mix it up a bit.

Haha, Instead of Jack, I'm so glad you're alive (kind of a little blunt) You could say okay...just a tip.

Even though k he was ok, he could still be seriously injured.

Typo! lol.

The story has a nice concept, cute little lovestory. I haven't watched the show, but it made me think of Logan's LDB stunt. Lol. Somehow it always comes back to GG.

Good job. :)