|Reviews for Hoth|
| kiku65 chapter 3 . 6/22/2008
'New and improved' is a phrase used much too often. Nevertheless...
| WillMoo chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
This is the best Vong-related characterization i've seen... good job man.
I just wrote a short story about the EU part of Star Wars, really the first story I've tried writing, could you tell me what you think?
It's on suburbanconnoisseurs. thanks!
| skywalker05 chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Your vocabulary is incredible. There's a fanstic mix of words here, making dense, visible scenes. There are some issues of flow; I can see how overlong sentences and fragments could be artistic in the hands of writers such as yourself, but often they break the rhythm of the paragraph they're in.
| kiku65 chapter 8 . 3/1/2008
A beautiful addition. If the cretins who lurk on this site had any brains at all they'd notice
| kiku65 chapter 6 . 11/2/2007
No spelling errors I can find... but then I wouldnt be the one to ask ;)
Still enjoying this thoroughly. Kepp it up! Dont get discouraged by the lack if reviews - OC fics never get many, even the good ones.
| kiku65 chapter 5 . 8/28/2007
O.O A cliffie? Things are speeding up...
| kiku65 chapter 4 . 7/29/2007
Every chapter brings new suspence-ness (suspence-ese?). Not to mention a deeper look at the Vong beliefs.
| Othalan chapter 2 . 6/26/2007
This is by far the best written fic I've seen on this site. This is truly amazing stuff you've got here. Keep it up.
| kiku65 chapter 2 . 6/26/2007
As previous reviewer said, do not be discouraged by the lack of responce. OC rarely get much reading-time spent on them, regardless of brilliance.
| Fortinbras chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
This story is amazing. Don't be discouraged if you don't get that many reviews, it's truly excellent.
| kiku65 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
O.o. 'Bout time the Vong got some fic-space on this net!