Uwaah! I really liked this interlude! At first, it made me all warm and giggly inside, but then, blammo! Difficult pieces of the past to make it all balanced out! I think I actually started crying a bit...I forgot to grab the Kleenex, and had to use my sleeve! Oh dear!

dang... that's sad... I feel sorry for Mithos...

O-OMG! That...that was so sad...-sob-

PLease...leave me to cry in the corner...

WAH!

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-sob- great...story...absolutely love it...

-sob- _

~MithosxGenis 4EVER!~

(Sniffles)

Aww, poor Mithos.

Great chapter

Happy writing :D

Alaia Skyhawk

I've always been under the impression that Martel and Mithos were around the same age, but here you said Martel was 11 years older. Did I miss something in TU 1 or in the game?

But yeah, again, kudos for taking the path less chosen. I've never seen anyone able to cover the situation of those two's childhoods, and what exactly happened to their parents or what have you. You did a really good job in putting this into perspective, and possibly gives a bit of a hook into your TU sequel.

Keep writing, I look forward to seeing that sequel.

Aw that was sad

The return of Emoish Mithos... but it fits with their personalities and all... it WOULD explain a lot.

Nice fic... Can't wait for RooS