Reviews for Fruit
campylobacter chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Oh HELL yes. I am totally craving some produce right now.
JadeBlueAfterGlow1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
OMG! hahahaha! lmao!
411babygirl101 chapter 2 . 11/28/2008
I thought these stories were pretty interesting I really do like your stuff you write. Maybe i was thinking you could do one on grapes or cherries
SingingShooter chapter 2 . 8/29/2008
wow very dirty...
Briar Elwood chapter 2 . 10/19/2007


Oh, dear, that is so BAD! And by bad, I mean, totally Vala-ness in innuendos. Good heavens, that's beautiful.

You must do STRAWBERRIES! (The sexiest fruit EVER!)


17629578269 chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
these are great! i l-o-e te first one. "Damn, but the man could eat a peach" :D
QuasiOuster chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
Wow, payback is something, isn't it? I love how you have them torturing each other and we could all use some fruit in our diet. Good stuff!
Shinki chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
That was just great. I love it.
starjems88 chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
nice, how about for Daniel peaches and cream. For vala strawberries and wiped cream. :)
devianttart chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
I think I am too embarressed to eat bananas now. *blush*
Milena D chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
Ho boy, that was awesomeness! I can't wait for the next installment!
spacegypsy1 chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
Yummy. That was my favoite fruit...however, not sure I will be able to eat it for a while after this... Wow, I should have waited until tonight to read this instead of on my way to work. What about a soft juicy mango?
acer-sigma chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
That was great. By the time your through with those two, the commissary will probably be banned from selling fruit.
GatePirate chapter 2 . 7/1/2007
Teehee! Loved this! Daniel had to be thinking some dirty dirrty thoughts there! Man, Vala must've loved the payback. Especially the way Dnaiel all but taunted her with that peach
starjems88 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
WOW! loved it.
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