Reviews for Swaping Lifes
Mishaka chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
omg u should really continue this story!
Ali Prewett chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
hurry with chapter 2 of swaping lifes please!
lovexisxamazing86 chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
luv it.
MeganRose007 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
thats realy good..

you posting any more chapters? think you should lol.

could you read and review mine for me, dont know whether to bother putting up the third chapter /. thanks. x
LittleMissHellion34 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
like it keep writing
lacihparg chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Needs work. Good to see it was published over a year ago, 'cause I know this isn't you. I'll be glad to help, Topaz!
redapples chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
lovely ]

update please

it is a tad short

barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
love it please contiue
Emma O'Leary chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
i like that you have edward living with his mom, elizabeth. most people when they have bella and edward switch roles put edward living with charlie. be careful when youre writing to keep it all one tense. you went from "i was quickly awakened" to "mom opens the door". it makes it a little hard to read if the tense keeps switching. personally, i would keep it past, except for quotes, which of course are present tense. great start!
Italiangurlinamessedupworld chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
please for the love of twilight UPDATE! PLEASE i am getting tortured!
Mrs. Quincy chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
BellaEdwardLove chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Do update, this is interesting(:
GreySide58 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Please continue this. I'd like to see where you take it.
doesnt matter chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
that was great, but you really need to make more.
edwardcullenlover107 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
it is good forr the beginning

i hope that things get more exciting
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