Again, quite hilarious. Excellent work!

Hilarious... The best laugh I've had in a while...

Wow, a history on Kieran and Oscar is just as intriguing as a history between Gawain and Tauroneo. I'm glad that there's a fanfic like this. Well, great work, and I'll stay posted...

OMG! lol I can't stop laughing (snigger). update soon!

ok. I have been reading through this and it is pretty good and funny. The reason I am reviewing is to applaud you for making the firefly quote actually work. Can't do something smart, do something right.

Ha Ha lolz Why you make Kieran so crazy? Hey are you going to add any of Oscar's brothers to the story soon?

OMG OMG ZOMG

That was the best chapter YET! Although I was kinda hoping the Soren/Kieran scene would be longer, the rest of it was incredibly funny and felt more natural then your other chapters-the humor was more random and thus even more hilarious! Good job!

"Silence or I will shoot you instead of the target." “I'm gonna feather his behind so much that he looks like a deranged peacock..."

XD XD XD

Yeh, I thought she liked Kieran... OH... XD

Very nice!

This was really good. IRIS LIKES OSCAR! Wait... Doesn't Kieran also like Iris? Oh crud. I see many headachs coming up for Oscar... So anyway, update fast. I want to read more.

Great chapter. A lovely memory.

I love Horace! XD

That's my kinda horse.

I love Kieran, he's so... Kieran-ish. XD. Poor Oscar. I don't know how he can stand the guy... you think he would have exploded by now. )

Anyhoo, I liked it, (He's in his pouting position again! XD) but there were a couple grammer mistakes, so you might want to spell check it. )

Also, although it would be random, you should throw Soren in there somewhere... he could insult Kieran and make him go crazy. XD

Soren: ...You're weird, and no one likes you OR your manly pride.

Kieran: WHAT? YOU GIRLY MAGE! ME AND MY MANLY PRIDE SHALL DESTROY YOU! BATTLE! RIGHT NOW! YOU AND ME! I'LL SHOW YOU-

*Kieran has a heart attack and dies*

Oscar: *Sighs in relief*

XD XD XD

Its pretty funny dude and a much better than the last chapter

That's awesome, I can really see Keiran refering to himself as 'super fine' Great and very funny.

umm I hope it gets better dude