Reviews for Bonded
Guest chapter 45 . 6/21
I know this is knit picky, but a rapier doesn't have a flat edge. It's too thin. That's also what made it a favored weapon for finesse based swords men.
pinkishme chapter 1 . 4/11
Always going to be in love with this fanfiction. I really loved the story. After reading other interesting stories in this site, this is still the best so far. 3 i hoped that the author would write more but i guess there are already other priorities at hand. Time flies by so fast.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2
I have read tour fanfic a lot of times and i love it... One of the top 2 in my list of the GA fandom ... I juste wanted to say that i was going to re-read it for the 7 time ! PS i really love yohr ocs
MerciaLachesis chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
Me:*rereading this fanfic for the 17th time* ah, yes. *sips tea* a true literary classic.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/18/2016
QueenBtch101 chapter 52 . 9/25/2016
OMG! i loved this story i finished it in 1 week. i could not put it down!
sri kungfon chapter 10 . 8/16/2016
the UK
Little-bad-Angel chapter 21 . 8/6/2016
I think that you mustn't let children that young drink alcohol (at least these amounts). When you write about it like that in your story you might give younger readers some wrong ideas. I would recommend a warning at the start of the chaptera 12 or 13 year old drinking half a bottle of whiskey is a no go in real life and should be adressed as and irresponsible drinking are a huge problem and even though I think I understand why you put it in the story I would appreciate a warning to/for young users in the future.
Guest chapter 52 . 8/3/2016
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Guest chapter 52 . 8/3/2016
Oh my god! You don't know how much I loved this fic! I haven't read one this good in a LONG time. I love how you made Natsume and Mikan on the. Same footing(actually I think u made Mikan more badass) and how you created OCs that were loveable! I loved the idea of familiars as well. The only thing I would change is the switching of tenses. The story switches from past tense to present tense a lot. There were also a moderate amount of grammar mistakes, but those should be easy to fix. If you need any help with that,I'd be willing to help. My professional email is
Guest chapter 52 . 8/2/2016
this fan fiction was sooo good! I loved it!
sme1228 chapter 52 . 4/15/2016
love it its a really good story hope you make a nether on as good as this one but then again a story could never be recreated because its one of a kind
all stories have that one thing thats different from the rest with same it takes sometime too notice it with others you can easily see it
NagiIsMyBae chapter 3 . 4/4/2016
U r such a spoiler!
saltqueen chapter 52 . 2/25/2016
Bibliophobia962 chapter 33 . 2/6/2016
I'm sorry but I think your an idiot well not really but it was stupid to do what you said with the tequila and alcohol. Also good job with the story.
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