Reviews for All You Can Eat
LILI chapter 6 . 9/6/2008
AWSOME STORY . I HOPE YOU POST MORE SOON
HRH Silver chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
Hey Emmie...

So you go ahead and stick yourself in there, eh? LOL And Iggy x Em? Yeah, I know what you're getting at. XD

Moi
Inamorta chapter 6 . 8/6/2007
i like it but add fax!

:D
Jeb's-worst-nightmare chapter 6 . 7/26/2007
it was great... exept for the fact that ella is the best friend any max could have , not em! plus...I know who/what em is!
TaraDragonWing chapter 6 . 7/22/2007
Keep going. Don't worry about fastness just contreate on the story. We don't mind the wait, but not too long.
RetteMich chapter 5 . 7/8/2007
'(It’s not like anyone will die, XD)'

thats what you think.
QuEeNoFwHiNiNG chapter 5 . 7/7/2007
LOVE IT!
QuEeNoFwHiNiNg chapter 4 . 7/5/2007
i loved loved LOVED IT! i love those kinda chapters!
RetteMich chapter 4 . 7/5/2007
more. more more more more.

Kay?

I love it.
nyanja14 chapter 4 . 7/5/2007
"Fang looked up, and nodded briefly, apparently immune to Em’s happy disease."

I LOVED that. Great way to put it, very fresh.

Bleh, sushi.
I'll have some stupid cliche chapter 4 . 7/5/2007
Would Em be derived from Emiline? I was just wondering.
guess who chapter 4 . 7/5/2007
good job gr-EMILINE! It was cool how you used actual places and beds and where you were!
I'll have some stupid cliche chapter 2 . 7/5/2007
Haha. A tiny heartbeat. Because our heart beating doesn't keep us alive or anything.
I'll have some stupid cliche chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Indignant is a good word. And you know, Vegas isn't ALL pretty lights. That's only the strip. The rest is relatively gross and dirty and gang-ridden. Especially northern Las Vegas. Ugh.

P.S. I looked at the end I was like "Oh my God! I do that. I do that. And now they have it. Oh my God!" I thought it was the coolest thing ever. Just had to say that.
Jeb's-worst-nightmare chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
hey "EMILINE"! its me, like my pen name?
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