Reviews for The Child Within
Dark chapter 4 . 3/13/2013
More!What the heck are you waiting for?
1animelover chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
i loved your story and i hope kagome gets out of therapy soon and please please please make inuyasha dump that bitch kikyo-or as i like to call her Kiky-Ho
1animelover chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
i loved your story and i hope kagome gets out of therapy soon and please please please make inuyasha dump that bitch kikyo-or as i like to call her Kiky-Ho
1animelover chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
i loved your story and i hope kagome gets out of therapy soon and please please please make inuyasha dump that bitch kikyo-or as i like to call he Kiky-Ho
who-knowz chapter 4 . 7/3/2007
gr u just had 2 end it with a thought of kikyo... *glares* aw cummon seriously though... hurry and update plz!
fireyfeline chapter 4 . 6/29/2007
please update! I love it. Your an awesome writer so keep at it!

fireyfeline
Yideungbyung Kim chapter 4 . 6/27/2007
Wow, just wow. Now you have done it. Made an Au fic that isn't BS. You described every little thing well and made the emotions flow like they were actually there. Very good. :)

I noticed a few spelling mistakes but I can forgive. Since this is so well written. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.

Yideungbyung Kim
Mr.Evil chapter 4 . 6/27/2007
i can see it now, when Kagome goes to his school she is going to be jealous of Kikyo. i hope u update soon
Yideungbyung Kim chapter 3 . 6/26/2007
Wow. I normally hate AU stories but this one is actually cute. And very realistic as well. I felt the pain Kagome was going through when her mother accidentally slipped some words. Poor girl...

Very good. I'll keep this one on watch.

Yideungbyung Kim
Mr.Evil chapter 3 . 6/26/2007
very nice, so much pain, i hope to read more soon
fireyfeline chapter 3 . 6/26/2007
update!update!update! I love this story so very much. Please update soon. I hope Kags doesn't freak when she see Inu...hehehe

fireyfeline
Flawless-Miko chapter 2 . 6/26/2007
UM I REALLY LIKE IT .IT HAS A CHILD HOOD DRAMA IN IT .POOR INUYASHA AND KAGOME NOT ABLE TO SE EACHOTHER:( BUT I REALLY LIKE .:)
Flawless-Miko chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
OK WOW THAT REALLY GOT TO ME ! IM SERIOUS WOW !
Mr.Evil chapter 2 . 6/26/2007
still noticed a paragraph with too many ands but ur detail is much better. its funny how right now Souta is actually the older sibling lol, update soon
Mew Mittens chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
*cries*

I loved it. Please write another?
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