Reviews for Lacking in Manners
Setsuna-X chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
years later and this is still funny XD
kage kitsune no yami chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
That was great. That had me laughing the whole time:)
KaKashiisWifey chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
lml hakkai violated o.d...i luv when he's serious!
Lover of all that is Animated chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
This was GREAT! I loved it. I can so see that happening. Those to don't fight nearly enough.

GO HAKKAI! (Keep up the great work)
brkstrtrcr chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
"Your accent's fake. And you fight like a girl."

Roflmao! I love how they stayed completely in-character the entire time!
Samm Eugene chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
genius. I was laughing SO hard when Hakkai threw out his childish little insult. And of course, i lost it again after only just regaining control at the "Necrophiliac" comment. Hakkai and Hazel conversing has always brought a smile to my face, but you made that smile into a full-blown laughing fit; awesome!
Novitascia chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Holysinner5527 chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
.HILARIOUS! i absolutally hate Hazel and i love how Hakkai always acts so mean to him. Hakkai rocks and when he called Hazel a necrophiliac i lost it. my sister looked at me like WTF? your great.
StarChild chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
flatout funny
MangaMe chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Funny! Luv your dialogue!
PuddleJumpin chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
HA! Good story! It's so like them!
VU-er chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
This is so funny! I couldn't believe the clip I read of it at OOS - This is perfect-putdown!
Xapita chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
This is classic! Love your dialogue!
Renji's Girll chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Loved it! Spot-on characters.
Tiko 8 chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Truly hilarious! My pick for Otaku Online's Dec. fanfic poll! Hope you win!
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