Reviews for Love before the Storm
Who Cares chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
I like bionicle, but this ruined it. Why is there love with bits of plastic? Also, I looked at more of these abominations and I cried with anger. Great job ruining bionicle! P.S. don't make more bionicle things. They are awful.
JACKY BRUH chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
This shouldn't exist. It's hideous.
Comment person chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
This still brings a smile to me. One of my favorite JallerxHahli stories I have read on this Archive.

From, Comment person
yoyoyowassup chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
what the hell this is so frickin stupid
Zelda12343 chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Aww! That was just adorable!
Comment person chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Jaller and Hahli, great job. A few mistakes, but over all, well done.

From, Comment person.

P.S Vakama knows about love? I wonder how...
KittenwithaSledgehammer chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
This was the first Fanfiction about Bionicle I ever read, great job!



hi chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Joe chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Great. Only one error ( I think ). I'm pretty sure jaller and hahli both have green eyes. Good job anyways:)
Fredey chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
That was beautiful. I actually cried. I might make this in to a movie
Faybos chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! That my friend, was one of the best JallerHahli stories I have ever read. [Not many around] Keep up the excellent work. D
Py687 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I do like them apples. Oh wait, was that part of the story still?

Pretty good. Although I'd say the love scene may have been too unrealistic in the Bionicle universe; what does Vakama know about love? Oh, and you didn't change the "Jala" to "Jaller" yet.

Jaller and Hahli - a great couple.

Final Score: 8/10
Ninjagirl27 chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
YOu shouldn't use Toas, it's just Toa. It is the same for plural and singular. I really like this story though. Keep up the good work :)
Foxyperv chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
good story I'm glad to finally see some JallerxHahli here!