Reviews for Secret Admirer
PeterAmaranth09 chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
Great story :) short but good
Guest chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
Simple but good :)
Chuffi4Harmony chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
Short but good!
MidnightOwlGirl9 chapter 5 . 1/30/2011
Wow this is so cute! Love it!
Abbigail Cross chapter 5 . 8/23/2009
Your grammar needs alot of help. Also, you kept switching tenses. You could also try not double spacing in the middle of a sentence, or double spacing unless it's to start a new paragraph, something this story severely lacks..

I also think Hermione, Ron, and everyone else was really OOC, and their characters could have been kept in Canon a little better.

Please don't take this as a flame, because it isn't intended as such. I'm pointing out the flaws in the fic, so that you can improve.

The idea behind the fic was good, though if the above had been placed in the fic, it would have been better. I like the idea. The overall fic was lacking crucial things, though.

Keep writing! :)

-Abbi
Oniaon chapter 5 . 3/14/2009
Aw how cute! Seriously! I love it!
not telling chapter 5 . 7/21/2005
good.
Loufiction chapter 5 . 8/27/2004
That was cute but it would have been extra cute if Harry had left her other hints :)
divinewhimsy chapter 5 . 11/23/2002
I loved this this story really rules

bye

dana dancer
Marlena chapter 5 . 10/7/2002
nooooooooooooo! i love harry! ack damn you hermione! lol j/k bu ti do love harry
erika chapter 5 . 6/12/2002
cute...ending short and sweet:D
erika chapter 4 . 6/12/2002
finally she remembers he never answered her ?
erika chapter 3 . 6/12/2002
intresting thought she would have caught on by now:D...LOL..this is good
erika chapter 2 . 6/12/2002
cool...i like it:D
erika chapter 1 . 6/12/2002
intresting:D
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