|Reviews for Written in Velvet|
| SeaCullen311 chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
hey its sara, love the story,but whats under the mattress?
| SilverEmber282 chapter 6 . 1/15/2008
oh! this is so intense!lolz.
i love this story so far! love it!
oh and awsome profile page by the way!lolz.
| none- spooky music chapter 6 . 11/7/2007
Uh, are we in 2nd grade? Half.. Like 1/2, one half..
| utfan23456 chapter 13 . 10/27/2007
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!
I CANT BELEIVE IT! YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUAL! TELL ME AT
| xXxBANDxGEEKxXx chapter 2 . 10/8/2007
yo symba, its vicky. nice story, um...ya, like it a lot!
| MyLion.MyLamb chapter 13 . 9/18/2007
*OMG* i absolutely loved it. it was the swetest thing. you had me gooing there for a while in the end. if bella died i was so gonna kill you, lol! cannt wait for the sequal! (by the way, a little slow, just catching on so dont sue me)
| brittasdf chapter 13 . 8/25/2007
omc you soo better write a sequel lmao this story is to good lol
| From The Shadows chapter 9 . 8/6/2007
Alright, your a good author, but sperm lives, like three weeks! I had to take sex ed. Not fun, anywho It would literally impossible for bella to get pregnant. Just FYI, other then that, i like your story!
| renthead315 chapter 13 . 7/14/2007
This is a super good story! Write more!
| Jexena chapter 13 . 7/8/2007
That was a really good story.
| Jexena chapter 12 . 7/8/2007
I think Carlisle should have delivered her. My mom was exstatic when she got to be the one to catch my nephew. Grandparents love that kind of thing. Plus, he is a doctor.
| Jexena chapter 11 . 7/8/2007
You made me cry. You are so mean. I want to know what happens though. So I will now go to the next chapter.
| Jexena chapter 10 . 7/8/2007
Well, Charlie caved quickly. I guess he saw the inevitability. He must have been waiting for the day she would say those words. All the time hoping they never would. Aren't all fathers like that?
| Jexena chapter 9 . 7/8/2007
I love Alice. She is such a cool person ... uh ... vampire.
| Jexena chapter 8 . 7/8/2007
She really should have known better than to get her hopes up. I do feel bad for them though.