Reviews for Written in Velvet
SeaCullen311 chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
hey its sara, love the story,but whats under the mattress?
SilverEmber282 chapter 6 . 1/15/2008
oh! this is so intense!lolz.

i love this story so far! love it!

oh and awsome profile page by the way!lolz.

nickiej
none- spooky music chapter 6 . 11/7/2007
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Haft...

Uh, are we in 2nd grade? Half.. Like 1/2, one half..
utfan23456 chapter 13 . 10/27/2007
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!

I CANT BELEIVE IT! YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUAL! TELL ME AT
xXxBANDxGEEKxXx chapter 2 . 10/8/2007
yo symba, its vicky. nice story, um...ya, like it a lot!
MyLion.MyLamb chapter 13 . 9/18/2007
*OMG* i absolutely loved it. it was the swetest thing. you had me gooing there for a while in the end. if bella died i was so gonna kill you, lol! cannt wait for the sequal! (by the way, a little slow, just catching on so dont sue me)
brittasdf chapter 13 . 8/25/2007
omc you soo better write a sequel lmao this story is to good lol
From The Shadows chapter 9 . 8/6/2007
Alright, your a good author, but sperm lives, like three weeks! I had to take sex ed. Not fun, anywho It would literally impossible for bella to get pregnant. Just FYI, other then that, i like your story!
renthead315 chapter 13 . 7/14/2007
This is a super good story! Write more!
Jexena chapter 13 . 7/8/2007
That was a really good story.
Jexena chapter 12 . 7/8/2007
I think Carlisle should have delivered her. My mom was exstatic when she got to be the one to catch my nephew. Grandparents love that kind of thing. Plus, he is a doctor.
Jexena chapter 11 . 7/8/2007
You made me cry. You are so mean. I want to know what happens though. So I will now go to the next chapter.
Jexena chapter 10 . 7/8/2007
Well, Charlie caved quickly. I guess he saw the inevitability. He must have been waiting for the day she would say those words. All the time hoping they never would. Aren't all fathers like that?
Jexena chapter 9 . 7/8/2007
I love Alice. She is such a cool person ... uh ... vampire.
Jexena chapter 8 . 7/8/2007
She really should have known better than to get her hopes up. I do feel bad for them though.
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