|Reviews for The Blade & the Bloom|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/28
| Ruby of Raven chapter 12 . 5/28/2016
Loved it! You did good in keeping them in character, in a way. Of course there was some discrepancies, but I feel like any and all that there might have been were completely made up for by tour immersive plot that managed to include my favorite X-Man.
I can't wait to see what you came up with for these characters to face in the next fic. ;) Good job.
| The Book of Eli chapter 12 . 3/3/2016
That was a nice read fun and emotional.
| DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 2 . 12/25/2015
amazing story, and what a day for Kim!
well, let's see what's going to happen in Chapter 3!
| Anbu-Nightfury chapter 12 . 6/12/2015
Thanks for writing!
| zafnak chapter 9 . 9/9/2014
re: Wade's reward for a Job Well Done
Oh my goodness!
| SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan chapter 12 . 8/24/2014
Well that was a great story, I'm surprised the fav, follow and review count is so low, this is one of the best written Ron/Shego fics in this section.
| Lewis-Sama chapter 12 . 3/14/2014
Love this story.
| all forms of fluff chapter 9 . 12/14/2013
This story started out really well. Then it developed a seal team 6 conplex and seised being about the Kim Possible universe. While I am not putting down the Bastards and the uniqueness that they happen to be, I felt that they became to focuse of the story. Honestly I am not sure what I expected from this story but realistic gun play just dosn't belong in a world with super villans. It just breaks the illusian of 'villiany' if you introduce guns into the mix and not have them being an issue in the timeline before. Drakken wish uzi toating sintho goons wouldn't be an incompant world changer. The law of averages would have Kim or Ron bullet ridden before graduation Monkey powers be damned. SO ... I guess thats all I have to say about that. While I wont be continueing with the story I do what to say. Thank You for the story. It was a pleasure
| Xalgusod chapter 8 . 12/6/2013
This was amazing! The military tactics really added to this. I also love what youre doing with Bonnie and Wade.
| Xalgusod chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
You sir, are a master storyteller.
| JoshMacantosh chapter 12 . 6/7/2013
This story was inspirational thanks to u and some other writers I have decided to write this summer... And yes if will be a Rongo
| Zanthraxone chapter 12 . 5/15/2013
Not sure if you will ever get this review but loved the story.
OCs where good and I can't complain about them. I like the way you passed the torch Yori.
Also I think even though Ron is parting ways with Rufus to a certain degree I like how you placed him.
LOVED The Insert Of Logan rock on for that.
I whole heartily enjoyed the Wade Bonnie sections of the stories and thought that was a great pairing for the way you made her char change around.
Sorry I'm not one to Review every chapter but I like to place encouraging words at the end of a story.
Great job headed to read the rest of your stories.
| BlackRevenant chapter 5 . 4/17/2013
And done reading.
Thanks for the ride. It was fun while it lasted.
Nothing really wrong with the story, Just not feeling the random OC and all that. It just felt forced.
Again thanks for the ride, but this ain't what I look for in my Rongo
| Officer Hot-Pants chapter 12 . 11/12/2012
Hard enough to find a good Shego & Ron story, but just this side of impossible to find a *complete* one. I enjoyed this story immensely, and I have nothing but high hopes for the sequal.
This story scores serious bonus points for the following:
-Keeping Shego "Shego"; she doesn't go soft-n-sappy five minutes in, she never loses her rough edge, and she isn't looking to settle down.
-Avoiding turning Kim into an almighty, senseless, raging bitch-queen from hell.
-Remembering that Rufus exists (surprising just how many forget the little guy), and actually giving him a role to play.
-Creating a group of OCs that didn't make me want to hurt things close at hand, and that I actually mostly liked.