Reviews for Make Me Beautiful
Jenmoon1 chapter 10 . 5/22/2013
wow good story
slimegirl chapter 10 . 1/25/2012
This story is really old...but frankly, I don't give a shit! :D

I wated to tell you how much I loved the story. It was sweet, hot, and there was a dash of drama. I loved it!

Aaaand I also love MelloMatt. So. Damn. Much.

They like...compliment each other so well! dunno how, but they freakin' do.

And reading fics about them fill my heart with joy. Why did they have to die? -waves fists in the air dramaticly- WHY?

Pff...anyways. I adored your story and that is why I wrote a review. Dispite it being old as -f word- or, as I like to sa in front of the kiddies, fridge.

Ima crazy female dog, I am.

Jadyn
Melmel Phase chapter 4 . 3/29/2011
I love the fire thing! Axel Black Fire! Hot! Wait...literally! I just realized that as I was typing it! Lmao! So far this is my fav chapter!
Melmel Phase chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Interesting! .
Marcius F.S chapter 10 . 7/30/2010
Wicked Awesome! Keep up the good work!
Cleonhart chapter 7 . 1/11/2010
DUDE that last part was from the KH Doujin Crown! I SWEAR! anyways i like it good job :3
S.RAYN chapter 10 . 12/19/2008
I didn't really get the ending. Or see much character relationship development. But I guess that's just love at first sight.
S.RAYN chapter 5 . 12/19/2008
YES! Riku doesn't really LOVE Axel fully! lol.
S.RAYN chapter 3 . 12/19/2008
Not much to say, but I guess I like the story well enough so far. Despite, the Axel/Riku. -shudders-
AngelsInWasteland chapter 8 . 10/1/2008
The part at the end was confusing...but I liked it. I spent ten minutes trying to figure it out. I am that stupid. It seems obvious now.
AngelsInWasteland chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
I officially love this story. My new fave. Is that true about the bloody nose thing? I heard that somewhere else, but I'm not sure.
C3LLO chapter 9 . 8/7/2008
Oh FCK. I Loved It. I Absolutely Loved The Story, Plot, And Ending. Everyone Is Happy. Thank You For Making My Day So Much Happier.
C3LLO chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I ADORE It. It Literally Pulled Me In, And I Couldn't Stop Reading. Can't Wait To Read The Rest !
CheshireMiko chapter 9 . 7/17/2008
This is a truly amazing story...I love the way you write.

I felt really,really bad for axel how he had the unconditional love for Riku...

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I just really wanted to hug him...and proceed to let him cry on my shoulder while I glared a death glare at riku...

but I cant help but favorite axel. Hes my fav charrie other then Kairi, cuz he reminds me of me.
Manderamander chapter 9 . 4/16/2008
Omg I love this, and the first time you mentioned the song I looked it up on youtube and played it in the back ground as I read this over, and over again, I swear I have that beautiful song memorized, and it feels great to know that whenever I hear this song my mind will instantly go back to this story, thank you it was beautiful.
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