Reviews for Second To None
little-kingsfan2005 chapter 7 . 3/31
This was an awesome story; I appreciate your making Jon O'Neill and the Air Force Basic Military Training as authentic as possible, and your Jack O'Neill's ribbon rack was pretty cool, too. By any chance, did you happen to make one for TSgt. Vega (who is one of my favorite original fanfiction characters ever, by the way), or give him a first name?

Anyways, thanks again and keep up the good work.
BelladonasMom chapter 7 . 11/12/2017
This story is amazing. I am so invested in these characters. I beg you to continue this journey. It's amazing!
Rhysel Ash chapter 7 . 7/6/2017
*sigh* I reread this story every few months in the hope that you will write the next installment soon. Not yet, huh? Oh well.
Dr. Scott chapter 7 . 10/10/2016
Just found your work and really enjoyed the glimpse into basic training. Love how you wrote Jon as his own man. Both true to the character of Jack and yet bravely carrying on too. thanks!
agentcherub chapter 7 . 8/26/2016
Hey, love the story, just wondering if there is a sequel?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
What happens next, I have read and re-read this story, what happens net, please write and tell us all.
erik chapter 7 . 3/26/2016
Still one of the best Jon O'Neill stories and I hope someday to see it continued. Thank you.
reader chapter 7 . 10/31/2015
This fic was AWESOME. I don't even have words to tell you how impressed I am. I read it in one go, couldn't stop, it sucked me in. Perfect. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
gail19 chapter 7 . 10/26/2015
Totally worth staying up past my bedtime!
MattKennedy chapter 7 . 4/10/2015
Great story! Really loved your development of a 'minor' character, though I did miss the great back and forth between Jon and Jack in the earlier installments of the series. :)
kateydidnt chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
I keep hoping one day you will write/publish the sequel to this fantastic story.
BerlinBear chapter 7 . 8/14/2014
I know this story is a little older, but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it anyway. I loved every little moment of it. Although I'm from Germany and know nothing about military procedures I found it interesting to learn a few things about the Air Force. Especially from an insider. The many shortcuts were a little difficult, but fortunately you explained them very well at the bottom of every chapter.
The plot was very exciting, I just couldn't stop reading. The way you integrated scenes and information from some of the episodes and Continuum was great. The pranks Jon pulled were brilliant and even though I didn't get all the jokes behind the prank-calls, I often had to laugh.
The characters were great too, the ones from the show as well as your own. The conflict between being Jon and being Jack at the same time, was very well written and I loved the scenes when Jon met somebody from Jacks past, awesome!
Last thing to say for me: I would love to read a sequel with TSgt Vega at the SGC when he learns that Jon is a clone with all the memories of Major General Jack O'Neill. That would be really great!
Thanks again for writing this, I had a great time reading it!
Susan M. M chapter 7 . 7/21/2014
First, thank you for your service. As a member of the US military, you are overworked and underpaid, but your service is appreciated. Second, thank you for the story. Excellent writing. Your personal experience added to the depth of details, and the blend of humor and action was perfect.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/28/2014
Well written and it shows that you have served for a number of years. However I can never take US drill and cermonies serious, impressive yes but it lacks style and class (the concepts of "looking professional" and "no PDA" are laughable). I assume that you are an NCO and not a flag officer (although the joint chiefs writing fanfiction, preferably togheter, is a very amusing though) so I will not give you the speach on why US foreign policy and use of force is something to be ashamed of and why GW Bush deserves life in prison for crimes against humanity.
Neellok chapter 7 . 6/28/2014
This was an enthralling and stunning story. Thank you for writing it. :)
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