Reviews for Invitation
Genril chapter 11 . 7/25/2007
This story is excellent did you know that?

I love the quick updates too.
nekoluver chapter 9 . 7/24/2007
Ooh Temari and Shika are gettin' kinda naughty! XD

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yasashii neesan chapter 9 . 7/23/2007
that was really good... update soon!
beerbelly chapter 9 . 7/23/2007
wow... great chapter. XD i wouldn't mind if there will be some lemons on the next chapter, it would only make it more interesting, but not the smutty type i hope. _ nice one!
Meng15 chapter 9 . 7/22/2007
This is good. Keep going, my friend!
spriterx chapter 9 . 7/22/2007
Awsome chapter can't wait intill Gaara talks to Shikamaru:)
0xlostmymusicx0 chapter 8 . 7/21/2007
this story is really good... keep it up!
LadyOfTheOldWorld chapter 8 . 7/20/2007
OMG THAT WAS SO CUITE! Wow I never thought Gaara could be so...understanding(or polite for that matter...). Please update soon!

Sincerely,

Temari-chan.
Meng15 chapter 8 . 7/20/2007
This is a great story! Keep it up!
Genril chapter 8 . 7/20/2007
“I give you my solemn word that whatever happens I shall cause Nara Shikamaru no harm.”

Reminds me alot of:

'I solemnly swear that I am up to no good!'

Excellent chapter it was worth waiting for.
spriterx chapter 8 . 7/19/2007
Awsome chapter can't wait for more :)
beerbelly chapter 8 . 7/19/2007
_ love this chapter! it only showed how close the siblings were!

cant wait for the next update! _
Spiked Jin chapter 7 . 7/18/2007
the story definitely picks up in the later chapters. but i think that the characterizations do tend to stray a bit from believeable at times. other than that small issue, good story so far.
spriterx chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
Awsome story keep it up :)
12342212 chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
luv this story! and that was so cute!... continue updating please!... ]
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