Reviews for Invitation
Meng15 chapter 9 . 7/22/2007
This is good. Keep going, my friend!
spriterx chapter 9 . 7/22/2007
Awsome chapter can't wait intill Gaara talks to Shikamaru:)
0xlostmymusicx0 chapter 8 . 7/21/2007
this story is really good... keep it up!
Maddeline Bonnefoy-Kirkland chapter 8 . 7/20/2007
OMG THAT WAS SO CUITE! Wow I never thought Gaara could be so...understanding(or polite for that matter...). Please update soon!


Meng15 chapter 8 . 7/20/2007
This is a great story! Keep it up!
Genril chapter 8 . 7/20/2007
“I give you my solemn word that whatever happens I shall cause Nara Shikamaru no harm.”

Reminds me alot of:

'I solemnly swear that I am up to no good!'

Excellent chapter it was worth waiting for.
spriterx chapter 8 . 7/19/2007
Awsome chapter can't wait for more :)
beerbelly chapter 8 . 7/19/2007
_ love this chapter! it only showed how close the siblings were!

cant wait for the next update! _
Spiked Jin chapter 7 . 7/18/2007
the story definitely picks up in the later chapters. but i think that the characterizations do tend to stray a bit from believeable at times. other than that small issue, good story so far.
spriterx chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
Awsome story keep it up :)
12342212 chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
luv this story! and that was so cute!... continue updating please!... ]
Maddeline Bonnefoy-Kirkland chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
yasashii neesan chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
that was so sweet!... i love this story... update soon!
octogone chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
Well i must admit that this fic is now becoming more and more interesting. Still lighthearted and well written.

You picture particularly well the rivalry between Ino and Temari, with Ino green with envy about how close Shikamaru and Temari have become. Not to mention the attitude of Shikamaru, in complete denial of what he's actually feeling for Temari.

Keep up that great work!
beerbelly chapter 7 . 7/17/2007
that was romantic! XD i enjoyed reading it... definitely looking forward for the next chapter! _
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