|Reviews for Akane's Terrible Day|
| Kirako chapter 1 . 1/19
Got here from a random Ranma tropes page (fandom specific plot maybe?) and all I can say is
F**KING THANK YOU.
I have seen WAY too many fics where ANY of the main chars get like, raped or some shit, and all I can say to each one is "...Seriously? Have you ever actually seen this show/read this manga?" It's especially bad when it happens to like Ranma and stuff and isn't given an actual reason. But it's pretty bad with Akane too.
So. Thank you.
| lord Martiya chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
What the-How the hell would two regular muggers be able to overcome Akane? Did she laugh herself so hard she choked herself?
| Jfmam chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
A nice short story.
You managed to portray Akane well, particularly at the end during her exchange with Ranma.
I liked the build-up of tension, and the subsequent pay-off at the end. Well done!
| Noy Telin'u chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Yeah, pretty much.
I thought if Akane as a girl who pushes the limit of what's physically possible in a world of diffrent physics that blows that out of the water.
She carried a fridge with one hand up a flight of stairs like nothing!
Even in Ranma 1/2 world, she's in the 1%.
| Doctor McFly chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
"They'd been a pathetic challenge, neither of them even up to the standards of the Hentai Horde."
| KGB chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
That's exactly the 'predictable results' I expected when I clicked the story. Nice.
| Beloved Dawn chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Ha ha, I can just see her fuming because she let a hit through. Didn't even touch her, but close enough.
Those two punks got what was coming to them. Go Akane!
| Roja-Cyd chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Nice ! I'll have to go back and check my stories to see how I wrote Akane...
| Bambi Star chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Made me scared for Akane for a while, but this fic really does put things back into perspective for me. I have to rethink more carefully about portraying characters in fanfics again. Thanks for this one-shot. )
| Lord Sia chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
I agree. Let's face it, anyone capable of pulling a wooden mallet out of thin air and then nail a guy so hard that he actually flies even a single meter (lets not even contemplate what happens to a normal human's body if she were to attempt a LEO-strike...) is more than capable of achieving a one-hit-kill on most people by blunt force trauma to the abdomen. And Mousse... Ok, the "that ain't a knife; THIS is a knife!" just became obsolete, mainly because he pulled out a 6-foot claymore and proceeded to flick it like a butterfly knife... And Ryouga? Dude, the guy is probably cappable of walking through machinegun fire without even noticing. Let's not talk about "Mr. I-do-supersonic-without-vehicles-and-copy/counter-everything-thrown-my-way" Saotome...
Also, nice buildup, it was tense, especially when she came home with a torn dress (was the lack of detail intentional? Cause if it was, damn good move) gave some real suspense... Until I cracked up. Damn tomboy should work on her defense...
| Nixie002 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I liked how Akane was depicted. Alot of people seem to forget Akane's real strength sometimes with all the craziness that revolves around Ranma. I really liked the whole warning the yakuza thing haha That was pretty amusing. ] I wish more people remembered the fact that they do live in a normal country even if Nerima gets pretty crazy sometimes and write about the "normal" life they face too.
| Ganheim chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Ranma, Kuno and the rest wouldn't have to fight over a kiss that wasn't going to happen.
They began to advance once more.
[There's no separator following this, so I was slightly confused/disappointed not to see a scene describing Akane beating the snot out of the petty thugs. I don't know if that was intentional.]
the dining room table tp peer at me in the hallway.
This one's pretty simple, mainly directed at those fanfiction authors who write Akane as a normal person
[I don't know how a mistake like that could have been made.]
Muggers and even "trained martial artists" (real world terms, not Ranmaverse terms) are a joke to her.
[I would have to agree with that.]
A simple one-shot that I was concerned for a moment was going to try to imply that Akane had lost, but then righted itself. Pretty good for as short as it was, and with all said and done I guess it does work without us actually being given the fight scene, though I think a separator of some sort would have been nice to clearly tell us that there isn't a teleportation or missing chunk of the chapter – though since that's the biggest gripe I have with the chapter, good job.
| Optimism chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Incredible writing. Normally I would deprive the romance-less stories of any attention, much less review. Great, great job, and a very good point, too!
| Zoko chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
That one hell of way to send a message. But probably understanding after all that probably happen to Akane.
| luger 7 chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
I liked this fanfic. Akane isn't invincible but she is quite powerful. She is powerful compared to most people. She did take on a lot of guys at the very beginning of the series.