Reviews for Master of Puppets, Demolition Chief |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is Naruto a masochist with stockholm syndrome? Why tf would he go back to serving the people that abuse him? |
![]() ![]() I hope Naruto gets older and blows up the people who hurt him also i like this side of Deidra Awesome Job keep up the amazing work |
![]() ![]() ![]() imma keep reading this but I NEEDED to say it. ain't nobody EVER gonna blush from being called tootsie lmao |
![]() ![]() I thought Deidara was Iwa's Mad Bomber |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank God for skipping the first part of the exam. it's always so boring and exactly the fucking same |
![]() ![]() ![]() a C rank mission means there's no Shinobi. this isn't a Genin mission. this is an Anbu A rank mission. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so they're still making him a Genin when he's has jonin level strength? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great battle scenes. deplorable use of gay as an insult. what are you ? 60 years old or 13? narration with a hint of homophobia huh, that's what gets you going? lmao trash |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know this is a useless comment because it seems that this is abandoned but cant you just use english simple phrases? i dont get yall that uses japanese phrases, if you inject them in fics like these, you just make them sound like a foreigner trying to use another language. it's already translated and interpreted that they are speaking japanese but to an english speaking audience. is it because it sounds cool, for the kicks? lmfaooo anyways, i like the ffic, but the tsuchi kin scenes was garbage lol he's twelve what the hell is his business feeling up a girl lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nobody knew he’s the son of the fourth Hokage tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outside of this being a crack fic they would have instantly arrested naruto lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() He beat 3 jonin and they make him a genin lmao no sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I’ll treat this as some crack fic now it’s fun to read though even though he’s basically a S rank missing non |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this is a crack fic now huh |
![]() ![]() ![]() All the unnecessary romaji is so cringy |