Reviews for Pain
ladyccino chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Roxas why so rough? *-*

uwahh!

that was so hawtt... -wipes nosebleed-

and on the streets (?) too, lol

if I was walking home & saw them there I'd be taking a hella lotta pictures of them then put them in my comp then my mum would find out then she would ground me for as long as I live and scold me about putting porn in my laptop OwO

oh & she would burn them with me in it XD
kurosora1984 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Dude. I know this is random, but I figure there's 50-50 odds that you won't even read this until we're all moved, so then it'll be like, not random. It'll be in the MASS. XD

LOL I'MMA DORK, SORRY YOU MOVED IN WITH ME YET? XD

Yeah, I just wanted to LET YA KNOW I made a random pick and I LOVE this one. GUH. HATESEX. I think you've given me a new fetish. And I've never seen RokuRiku I liked, til now. And that's awesome. And I srsly look forward to, yanoo, GETTING all this better, because the way you manipulate canonverse mades me shiver with love. LOVE. LOVE I TELL YOU.

Yeah OK. *SHIVERS* I really, really like this. 8D
Duskri chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
This...I think you made me cry.

*huggles Riku and Roxas plushie*
inactiveGE chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Riku hates himself, this is an interesting point to show why. I thought the fact that he screwed up a life contributed to his emophase in kh2, I like how Roxas reacts here, and the whole use of Namine is corrupted.
Knit.pump chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
This was fantastically dark and was definately a step outside the comfort zone for everyone seeming as it its very rare to fine a RoxasxRiku fic.

I loved the tension which you maintained through the whole fic, I was holding my breath the entire way, waiting for the next move. The lack of emotion at the beginning and how it just swells into lust, and the Riku just overcame Roxas at the end.

It was nice to see the view through Riku's angsty eyes and this bit, "He’d never allow Sora to see him again. He wasn’t worthy of the Light." stood out immensely for me because I was relating it to Riku's actual actions in the game.

Definately heartbreaking, but in a good way _
Windsong chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
It is very rare that you find a story that manages to keep such a high level of tension, right up until the very end. This definitely had me on the edge of my seat, with the way you mixed passion and emptiness. It was wonderful, the way you wrote Roxas through Riku's eyes-you captured the torment of both characters so well. Lovely work, as always.
hyorii chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Never thought I'd read a RikuRoxas fic ((or a AxelSora)) but here I am...

xD I guess it's a lil kink for me, but anyways...that was sad...yet good O_o;; does that make sense? Of course it does. Anyways, I like it - good job OwO

Poor roxas man xD and Riku...and maybe Sora...

No, poor namine...she has to see all these escapades and wipe them xD JK JK
Monochromatic Paint chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
RikuRoku really is just too sad... Even though you don't usually write RikuRoku, when you do, it's just as beautiful and heartbreaking as your other pieces.
nolongerherereally chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
I always did like RikuRoxasRiku. Great description, I loved every word of it.
XxXMayhemXxX chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Well, this was interesting.

._.

My limited knowledge can't grasp this one, so I'm not sure what to say. I mean, it was good. I just... yeah.

Riku and Roxas isn't a pairing I've heard of before, though it makes sense in this way. Something. I dunno. (babbles)-sigh- I'm so out of the loop.
hieisomething chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
ack! o.0 Roxas..topped..Riku? hahahahhaha o wow that was interesting *nod* hehehe poor Roxy got so confused
Luna Lovegood1 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Wow. That was really sad. I feel sorry for both of them, just like I did with the game. I feel sorry for Roxas because he doesn't have a heart and disapears at the end of the game (I cried like a baby) and Riku because I did think he loved Sora like that but couldn't say anything. Especially since Sora like Kairi. *Sigh* How do you capture the characters like that? It's creepily wonderful ;)
kuriqa chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
wow... that's the first time i've ever read a riku uke fic... and it was really bery good... a bit weird because it's roxas and riku... but that's ok i guess... ooh! i have msn and aim if you want to im with me some time... both of them are kuriqa for msn just add hotmail... i love to talk to the authors that i love!

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NightimeRoseOX chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Oh my, this was wonderful

It was so sad, mixed with lust and guilt and.. confusion..

Riku must feel lower then dirt to have taken such advantage of this situation.

A very powerful piece, right here.

This one had so many intense lines in it also-

"With his eyes closed, with the only sounds their mingled gasps and groans, it was easier to pretend it was Sora above him, Sora inside him, and Riku lost himself in the rhythm of their bodies."

I don't know, that one stuck out. He's just so /in love/ with Sora. He's not with him but he is at the same time and he /has/ to close his eyes so it'll seem more like the dreams he's most likely had of them being together for so long.

This was his only hope.. at least, that's what he thinks. For him it was a now or never ultimatum, he couldn't help himself. He took it.
Chocola Emo Shizzle chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Oh wow. That was... different.

But I still liked it.

You write really well!
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