Reviews for Naruto
firiathedork chapter 18 . 2/10
omahgod love it sorry ninja sasuke your gonna die alone lol TnT
ImaDucc chapter 17 . 2/6
Please if I was there with Ino I would also be screaming and squealing and jumping around like the yaoi fangirl I am
ImaDucc chapter 8 . 2/6
I've just started reading this, and so far, I'm totally into it. This fanfic is honestly one of a kind
Marvolo.R chapter 3 . 11/15/2020
Why did you change Naruto's parents' names? It's so weird to read it like this.. Sometimes I forget that they're his parent's I'm reading about
Marvolo.R chapter 1 . 11/15/2020
I already love it. So fresh! Ok next chapter
ThatsMyWeeb chapter 1 . 11/5/2020
You people should die for doing this
Guest chapter 18 . 10/14/2020
ahh...i love this...thank u sm for the story!

but i couldnt help but think up a few scenarios XD

like what if the dreamworld was actually an alternate universe and naruto keeps going back to it randomly and has sasuke just kill him over and over again.

"Uh, hi, teme-"
"Tch, not again." *stabs Naruto*

or maybe u could explore narutos godlike powers? XD

"What. How are you doing that."
"What am I doing?"
"That bowl of ramen wasn't there before, dobe."
(mysteriously) "I have my ways, Sasuke." *nods sagely*

ooh! or maybe even meet the real world sasuke!

"Well, this is awkward," Sasuke blurted, spotting the figure clad in black, a sword strapped to their back.

He'd be awed, if they didn't, yknow, look like him.

The other Sasuke tensed. "Where's Naruto?"

"Why do you want to know where my boyfriend is?" He asked defensively, remembering that this man had tried to kill the blond.

Other-Sasuke bristled indignantly.

thats all i have XD im out of writer juice! heh
Thegreatweeb chapter 18 . 10/5/2020
This is most likely one of the best completed fanfics I’ve read!
Consultant chapter 18 . 8/11/2020
Fuck Yaoi
Chun-Woo Han4Eva chapter 1 . 7/27/2020
Well damn, for the first time I actually wanted Sasuke to be the bottom! These two were just too cute! I would definitely be with Ino, taking all the pictures! I must say at first I wasn't going to read this because of the T warning and also because I normally prefer the ninja world. I favorite is action romance. But honestly *face burns red* fanfiction expanded my pervy side; I just skip to the explicit/mature fics. So YES you can write porn in your class, I approve! However, I got totally sucked in. I am glad to see Itachi nice in this one. And excuse me! Sai and Ino?! Was not expecting that one. But of course, Sai is awesome. I am glad I get to read more of your works. I just had to say this was adorable!
Hot4Sas chapter 18 . 5/19/2020
Oh my God, the first thing that came to my mind when I thought about writing a review was “this is so good this is so good this is so good this is so good this is so good this is so good this is so good this is so good this is so good this is so good THIS. IS. SO. GOOD!”.
I read your story like, ten years ago? And I remember liking it back then, but I just remember the general plot and some details so… But I couldn’t stop reading it! It’s SO entertaining and well written, I love how you were capable of mixing “the real Naruto world” and a “normal” one, how Naruto knows through his subconscious mind that he’s always been in love with Sasuke (and I believe that’s the case in the manga too… but whatever), how Sasuke is the biggest insensitive asshole in the dream world but he’s so nice and cool and NORMAL in the real world… finally! A not traumatized Sasuke! Ahaha I love him. And his denial! I thoroughly enjoyed it… The whole time. The only thing that put me off a little bit was the epilogue, when Sasuke’s reluctant to be bottom… But I know this can be the case for some people so, to each their own.
Thank you for the time you took to write your beautiful stories, for sharing them and your writing with us. They totally make my day (:
StoriesMakeLife chapter 18 . 11/26/2019
That unexpected moment when the story is fluffy as a lucky dragon, and Iike it anyway. Nice twist on the AU. Thanks!
Guest chapter 18 . 9/13/2019
Thank you...
Steph-2018 chapter 18 . 4/17/2019
I did read this one! The spatula throwing in the last chapter reminded me haha idk why that stood out. And then the responses to the questions in this epilogue!

Ahh. Finished right on 3am, better sleep and not start something new for tonight! I’m so sorry if these are irritating your email (if you still have alerts on). Or if you even check this email. Or don’t even have alerts anymore...

I’ll stop speculating. Moral of the story is 26 year old Steph loves you and your writing as much as 13 year old Steph did. I hope wherever you are and whatever you’re doing now you’re still writingyou were clearly made for it!
Steph-2018 chapter 16 . 4/17/2019
Bite him in the balls killed me.

Please stop being so funny. I think I’ll be sent to the couch next time.
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