Reviews for Naruto
Chocolatekat chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
wait, what? One minute we are headed for the Sound Village, they are attacked, Naruto is falling and suddenly Sasuke is back with us -free without the ritual being done, and it have been two years?
rqgenevieve chapter 18 . 11/11/2013
these two (:
rqgenevieve chapter 16 . 11/11/2013
you should have NejiGaara (;
Shoetsu Otaku chapter 17 . 11/1/2013
Ohhhh, I love the top/bottom rights part, such hilarity.
Shoetsu Otaku chapter 16 . 11/1/2013
Hahaha, I've never been caught writing porn, but this girl in my class got caught by another girl. Her reaction makes me fear how she would have reaacted to me writing gay porn... *shudder
H1me-sama chapter 18 . 10/30/2013
(can't log in on my phone, sorry)


You sir... Woman, are awesome. I honestly almost never leave a comment (because it's too troublesome...) But this fic! You got me interested right from the start just couldn't stop reading! I read this entire fic in 2 two days just because your writing skills blew me away!

I do have a question though, I noticed that the fic was written like four years ago, but weren't the names of Naruto's parents known by then yet? I kept replacing Arashi and Minako for Minato and Kushina in my head, because it always bugs me when names are diffirent, but ofcourse this fic was written long ago, and it's not something that needs changing or anything, I was just wondering whether you did that on purpose or anything.

And I really liked the chemestry between Sasuke and his family! It kinda emphasizes he loss of his family in the Narutoverse, and it kinda makes you wonder "could it have been like this if his family had still been alive in the Narutoverse?" Ofcourse, with Fugaku being not the way that he is in this fic it wouldn't be like this, but you still feel sorry for Sasuke. Or is it just me?
Yeah? Ok, moving on!

Then again, I also feel sorry for Naruto, but that's a given when watching Naruto.

My phone is dying on my so I'm gonna quit now, sorry for talking so much _"

Keep up writing the awesome fics!

Signed- Hime
Fi Suki Saki chapter 18 . 10/12/2013


This is Amazing! Absolutely GREAT!

I almost stop reading this in the middle, coz afraid with how the story goes to end.. But since i keep read it till the end, i'm satisfied!

Amazing AU SasuNaru that sort of mixed with the slightAU-Canon!

It's the first SasuNaru fic that i read after been a while, too long to not read any fic of this pairing/couple... And i'm actually glad that the story i found end up Fantastic! X)


But i did quite annoyed with the whole 'gay thing'!

They only love each other! Female or male, the just love each other!

Though, okay... Naruto did had had crush to Sakura, both his Reality and Dreamland did tell him that! But Sasuke's mind only at Naruto! To Naruto, and just Naruto! His attention only for Naruto! In both Reality and Dreamland, Naruto did realized that he's special to Sasuke and vice versa. And Sasuke know too, just confused and was in denial...!

But, boy or girl, since they love each other because they're close since childhood, gender actually have nothing to do with their feeling!

So they're, at least Sasuke, neither gay nor bi! He just love Naruto! And vice versa! Though it does took so long to figure it out!


Anyway... Wonderful fic! :3

Admit it Naruto... That you're the 'woman'! Lol

YAOILUVRGRL chapter 18 . 10/6/2013
OMGOMGOMGOMG! I absolutely love this fic! Sasuke and his family were extremely laid back, which was pretty OOC for them, but that just made it all the more interesting. Sasuke was also a dumbass in this fic. How the fuckin cheesecake did Sasuke not notice his feelings for Naruto. I swear, denial is not only a river in Egypt, but apparently a way to run from reality as well. I also like how you made the Naruto-verse apart of some fantasy world Naruto created while he was in a coma. Very original. I think the only thing that really made me tick about this fic, was the fact there where NO goddamn lemons! But the story was still good though. I usually don't read rated T or K because I'm a perverted bisexual female also a yaoi fangirl, who needs the visual of two hot guys fucking in my head. Also, I hated Sakura in this fic, and that it was a fresh change from her always pining after Sasuke. Honestly, I don't hate her, but I do find myself disliking her at times. In the first Naruto I definitely hated her. She was such a colossal bitch! Ino kinda pissed me off too. A lot of people excuse her behavior, and say Sakura was annoying but Ino was just as worse. They stopped being bestfriends, to become rivals in love for a guy who could care less about them. Sasuke's hot. He's attractive, intelligent, suave, a skilled shinobi, and that body would make a preacher go DAAYYYUUUUUMM! Hey even I can admit it. Sasuke's sexy. But that seems to be the only thing his fangirls saw. And their is more to Sasuke than just his looks, or Uchiha name. Sakura and Ino claimed they both loved Sasuke, but so did seventy percent of Konoha's female population. They say they all loved Sasuke, but I'm having a hard time believing that. They never even got to know Sasuke. To them, it wasn't about love, but how good Sasuke would look on their arm. I t was about being the one to end up with Konoha's walkin wet-dream, and almost every girl would take down any bitch that stood in their way when it came to making that dream a reality. Sakura and Ino are proof of that. And I honestly find that disgusting. They didn't even know the guy that well. And even after Sasuke tried to kill Sakura, she's still in love-or excuse me infatuated with him! That's honestly all it is. Infatuation. Naruto on the other hand, got to know Sasuke, and what started as rivalry soon became friendship, and they formed a strong bond. When I first started watching Naruto, I thought Sasuke was asexual at first. But the more I watched the series, I began noticing certain things about Sasuke and Naruto's relationship that made me wonder about some things. I would always ask myself "are they gay or something?" Keep in mind I had no idea what shounen ai or yaoi was at the time. I just noticed things about them that made me question their feelings for eachother. Like how besides his family, Sasuke has only ever shown strong emotion towards Naruto. Or how he saved his life on numerous occasions, way more than he did for Sakura. They've already kissed two times, not to mention the battle at the Valley Of End played out like a freakin romantic tragedy between two lovers. Did you not see the way Sasuke looked at Naruto before he left? And I was shocked-no flabbergasted when people said I was crazy for thinking they seemed like they were kinda gay for each other in the anime/manga! How could people not see it?! Like I said before, I had no Idea what boys love was, yet I still was able to figure out Sasuke and Naruto had feelings for eachother-and not the 'were just friends, so close were like brothers' type of feelings. Though I think people are mostly in denial, because they're shippers for SasuSaku, NaruSaku, and NaruHina, because c'mon, you'd have to be an idiot not to notice the shounen ai vibes the show gives off. I had no clue about that stuff, yet I noticed it. I did however discover shounen ai, shoujo ai, yaoi and yuri a few months later though. I became hooked! But mostly on shounen ai and yaoi. I also found out K. Masashi, creator of Naruto and Naruto Shippuden liked the idea of a shounen ai ending between Sasuke, and Naruto. He said SasuNaru was his favorite pairing, and that he even collected doujinshis and other items of them. I hope he ends it with SasuNaru. It would actually make sense to put them together at the end, seeing as the bulk of the anime/manga focuses on their relationship, and the struggles each boy faces as they grow up in the shinobi world, and work to become stronger shinobi, and follow out their goals. Right now one wants to defeat Madara, save his village, and become Hokage. And the other wants to destroy Konoha. Yet the anime/manga is mostly focused on them. Also I don't get NaruSasu fans. I can't really see Naruto as seme. It's hard to imagine. With his energetic, fun-loving, easygoing, yet feisty personality, he comes across as more of a bubbly uke than anything else. Not to mention he blushes a lot. Maybe not as much as Hinata, but way more than the male characters of the series. And he is really really really cute. Fuck, Naruto is gorgeous! The blonde hair, blue eyes, tan skin and whisker marks on his cheeks make him look exotic. Sasuke is a classic beauty, but Naruto's definitely an exotic beauty. Which is why I want Sasuke or SOMEBODY to rape him! I mean, look at him! He's so naïve-and dare I say it extremely dense. The perfect candidate for corruption. *smirks evilly* Naruto needs to be ravished, roughed-up, fucked so hard he can't walk for a week and punished severely for being so madda puckin adowable! It really should be a crime to be that cute. Everything Naruto does is cute. His appearance. Gorgeous. Beautiful. Striking. CUTE. The way he never gives up. Admirable. Inspiring. CUTE. How he becomes almost every person he encounters friend, and has the amazing ability to change a persons mind about anything, whether it be thinking fate controls our destiny ( Neji ) that we should hate every person and go on a killing spree because society deemed you a monster and shunned you ( Gaara ) or you must force everyone as mindless slaves so you can control the world in order to gain peace ( Nagato ). Also admirable aaannd CUTE. His ramen obsession. Totally fucking cute. How he gets easily riled up. Fiesty. CUTE. The way he says DatteBayo after almost every sentence. Again. Cute. I just can't see him as seme. Because semes are more like Sasuke. Serious. Smooth. 'Don't fuck with me' kinda attitude. And protective-and yes Sasuke was protective of Naruto on many occasions. Did you see the way he ran to find Naruto when he heard Itachi was after him? Yeah. Protective. Also Sasuke has way too much pride to be uke. He already has a bad case of superiority complex as it is. To make him uke would just shatter his ego. And he seems more the seme type. So that's why I like SasuNaru over NaruSasu. Anyhoo. Sorry for my ranting. Got a little carried away. HeHe. Sorry. But I did enjoy this story very much. It was original, and I loved how there weren't many spelling errors or awful grammar. And I just noticed your Roommates fic. And that you've finished the sequel. And the threequel. So gonna be reading that soon. Anyway, thanks for the great read. I loved it! You are awesome! I love you!
ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 18 . 9/6/2013
heather XD chapter 18 . 8/13/2013
I'm glad you posted the answers I totally forgot that hahaha oh also surprised kiba wasn't one to walk in on them ;) lol
heather XD chapter 17 . 8/13/2013
I can't believe naru thought that in the end ! Hahaha too funny but Inos reaction was my reaction and Sai's oh damn so priceless I love those two in this story !
heather XD chapter 16 . 8/13/2013
No, this meatloaf." Shikamaru frowned slightly. "I know it's poisonous, but it keeps trying to convince me to eat it."

Rofl ! Loved this line! Ooo also nice on the Ino and Sai hahaha
heather XD chapter 10 . 8/13/2013
I seriously loved Ino and Kiba in this ! They both made me crack up soo much and yay Gaara! Adore him !
heather XD chapter 3 . 8/13/2013
Hahaha believe it or not I was hoping tsun tsun and jiraiya would be his grandparents when I was like thinking of the other world ..real get me hahaha
Guest chapter 18 . 8/8/2013
Your story is so damn awesome! Love every single thing about it! I did notice there's no mention of whether Kakashi and Iruka are an item or not in his real life. Maybe Naruto sets them up in his dream 'cause he hopes for it?
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