Reviews for A Better Time
Kagega chapter 2 . 1/2/2014
Love fanficts like this one, I have always been a huge fan of a good romance - angst story and this was a very good short fic.
fullmetal-meeze chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
This is intense. This is tragic but deserved. The only thing that threw me off was the last few words of the story. I didn't like that part. I imagine he would have said "Hinata, I'm so sorry. For everything you've been through. For everything you've sacrificed for my sake. I'm here on the other side, Hinata. Waiting for you, loving you." This story was realistic. I like it.
Walk The Max Planck chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
That was beautiful. In just two chapters you made me cry; no one has ever managed that before. You're an amazing writer, and that really was beautiful.
VenRaider chapter 2 . 9/5/2013
loved it!
jonjames427 chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
Even after hearing all this I still can't forgive him.

If I could I would walk up to him, slap him in the face, and tell him "instead of killing the man the cut the lives of you clan short, live for the rest of them".
Commander Nosyniki chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
Stop making me cry asshole!
Coolio101 chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Ironically enough, reading about hinatas pain, and why she became an avenger, I can understand Sasuke better.
61394 chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
good story
NYuki-rin chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
OMG, so sad... I'm crying right now... So, so, so saad... Love it, love it, love it!
haydn chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
extreme hinata. scary good. thanks for writing
rebecca chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
Wow. I think that even blinded by her own pain she was able to help those around her, or at least refrain from hurting them.

She gave Neji advice that got he and Tenten together.
She forgave Sasuke and delivered his letter.
She did not impose on her friends - she did not want them to bear her pain.

This was totally true to Hinata. While you definitely change her character (avenger!) you didn't change her fundamental personality.

This was starkly realistic. Not OC, even though she has done a complete 180.
7889 chapter 2 . 12/3/2012
I cried. This was so sad. Everything, changing, it's just, so sad. But everything was so realistic and well made.
JokerAtWork chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
I don't know if it's because I'm so tired, but I'm actually crying at that ending. Who would have thought? I sort of hoped this would end up more than a tragic love tale at the end, that there would be that little dollop of happy gloop which the author gives to make people hopeful at the end so they're fooled into liking the story, and you handed a snatch of such, but it was too much of an afterthought so I ignored it. The story is better without a pseudo happy ending, and it would not have been literarily stimulating if it weren't a tragedy. Blah blah blah, gosh don't I go on. I might pop up in your inbox a couple more times, because I like your stories, and your writing style...thus far anyway. I liked this story - and I'm not crying anymore, my eyes only watered up a little.
Tomon chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
I was hoping for ending like that and you didn't let me down. Thank you for another amazing story
Lanky Nathan chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
Damn... that is a heavy story. You write a good angst mate
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