|Reviews for A Better Time|
| Hyper-Blossom Z chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
...that was sad... *sob...sob...sob...*
| Hyper-Blossom Z chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
...NO! NOT NARUTO-KUN! *SOB SOB SOB* ;(
| sharingan-girl chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
i love this story,it's so sad :'(
| Tisaku chapter 2 . 2/23/2010
It is a rare story that can bring me to tears. I think that I have read maybe eight out of more than two thousand that have evoked enough emotion. That number is one higher now.
Congratulations. This story is truly a great one.
| Sebine chapter 2 . 1/11/2010
Damn thats dark.
| Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
tragic, but at least neji gets his chance
| cali girl11 chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
LOVE YOUR STORY! Made my eyes water up. And it was so sad. :(
| Kid Shift chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
-The New York Times
If you don't cry at the end then you're one effed up person.
| erisnx chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
cried but it was awesomely tragic
| madgenius09 chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
Made me cry at the end
| The Blazing Fire chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
One of the most beautifully tragic short stories I've ever read... Just read it for the 5th or 6th time...
| Loungyoo chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
...wow...I...love it...especially the seemingly depressed aura of the story but at the end it was a happy ending in a sense.
| Tigeress-Jayde chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
I had tears in my eyes almost the whole time.
That is a well very well written story
not sure what else to say
cause everything contridicts itself :P
| Chika Hoshi chapter 2 . 8/10/2009
I ponder about this fanfic. In my opinion, this one is the best one out of all that I have read from yours. It was balance with the yin and yang and how Hinata knew how dark she became. And that it was different from how Sasuke is. He was less arrgonant than most of the other Sasukes in your other fanfic. A well detailed story. Maybe sometime in the future another fanfic will surpass this great story and I might ponder again like I am now.
| Chika Hoshi chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Grueling and dark Hinata that matches the scenes. Very nice. Even when I can't aprove 'The True Monster', I oddly aprove of this. Maybe it had to do with the wisdom thing Neji and Hinata pulled out. It was more arrgonant in 'The True Monster' than in this one.