|Reviews for Ninja of Nerima|
| Gohan Zero chapter 3 . 8/4/2008
Very cool story. It would be great for Arashi and his new team to go back to Konoha during the Sound-Sand Invasion.
That would shake up the whole story.
You event have each of his new team take an apprentice.
Ranma and Naruto is a no brainer
Xian Pu and Ino have similar personalities
Ukyou and Tenten have similiar fighting styles since they both use a lot of weapons.
Or even have Ukyou and Xian Pu train a team of Kounchi with Hinata, Ino, and Tenten.
Those would be my suggestions for the future.
As for something more reasont. Maybe have them meet and train Konatsu so he is stuck with his evil step family.
Update soon and Good Luck
| keichan2 chapter 3 . 2/17/2008
This is an interesting story!
I would like to read more, please!
| Ferail chapter 3 . 12/29/2007
Hello this is one of my first reviews so if i might not be that good at it. anyway isn't the regular bunshin jutsu just a genjutsu and the kage bunshin(shadow clone) a solid clone kinjutsu that takes up a whole butload of chakra and can only take one hit. And they've only been at this chakra buisness for a short time would they have the necessary chakra reserves to use any real jutsu like kage bunshin. What jutsu did he have them learn. Probably kawimaru(replacement), bunshin(illusion clone), and henge. Do they know any ninjutsu at all yet or is it all academy basics right now. other than those questions i really enjoy this storyand hpe you continue it. Thanks for the great crossover.
| ArmorOfGeddon chapter 3 . 9/7/2007
Nice story so far! I'm curious as to if the Yondaime will ever find a way to return home (though in that case it might be more of a Naruto fic than a Ranma one).
One minor nitpick though. In the latest Naruto manga, the Yondaime's real name was revealed, and it's not Kazama Arashi (that was a fanon, a fan made theory that got confused for fact, like the mistaken belief that Ranma is faster in girl form).
He's Naruto's father (like pretty much everyone expected), and his name was Namikaze Minato. As for Naruto's mom, he got her last name, and she is called Uzumaki Kushina.
| Sean Malloy-1 chapter 3 . 8/27/2007
Great job on the story, I'm hoping that you'll post more chapters soon
| Emma Iveli chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
Quite an interesting idea... I like it and I hope you update soon!
| Gvo chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
I've read your first story draft, and it was cool. But now reading the revising of the story. I have to say. You did a fuckin hell of a good job. Update Soon so I can read a bit more:)
| Innortal chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
Grand work as always. Looking forward to more.
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) I love to see them using their head.
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 2 . 8/26/2007
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Looks like Ukyou well have a better life now.
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
GREAT START! (*x4) Nice change to the time line.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
Nice team. I do hope Arashi can get back to his home dimension and bring everyone with him so he can see Naruto at some point. I can't wait to see Arashi catch Genma now!
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 2 . 8/26/2007
Nice chapter. I like how the Ukyo situation has been resolved. But will Ranma get cursed at Jusenkyo? Or will only Arashi follow Genma there?
| Mappadouji chapter 2 . 8/26/2007
Huh! i wonder what element Ranma's and Ukyo's is mostly compatible with.
| Mappadouji chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Pretty good! though i hope that in your latest update that you decided to use Yondaime's real name(Namikaze Minato) also Naruto's mother real name is Uzumaki Kushina. Other then those little complaints everything is goo.