Reviews for The Spark and the Force |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I liked how Sam tried to use his puppy-dog eyes on , and it didn't work. Rob's behavior and story strike me as extremely strange-I mean, just to sit there and watch Sam sleep-I'd understand it more if he was a chick, because Sammy alseep is as adorable as Sammy awake-and I'm as suspicious as Dean about him and his story right now, especially as his story seems tailor-made to push all of Sam's buttons. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liking what you've done so far, can't wait to see where you take it. Post soon, Peanut x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. I'm already hooked Can't wait for the next chapter. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent start plz update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm hooked. please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh awesome. Evil Empaths FTW... well kind of.. LOL: "Dean hated to witness such obvious disregard for tasty baked goods, but he bit his lip." Can't wait to read what else you got up your sleeve! |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUN DUN DUN DUN haha good start |
![]() ![]() ![]() good start. keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! sounds awesome! cant wait until you update again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start! Dean being mad with Sam is keeping from being observant about things around him - not having seen the car following themn and then staying at the motel when he dropped of Sam! I can't wait to see where you take this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first chapter, I look forward to the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, who is in the mysterious car in the shadows? Our villain, perhaps? A good beginning chapter, though I have one minor culinary matter to bring to your attention. While pancakes are indeed tasty goods, they are not baked. They are fried in a pan or on a griddle, preferable in some artery-clogging but totally delicious fat, such as butter or bacon grease (low-cholesterol wimps can use a spray like Pam) before they are served up, hopefully piping hot with plenty of warm syrup. Yum! Anyways, I'm looking forward to your next chapter, and Daddy Wincester's appearance a few chapters down the road. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It looks good, I'll be wating for more. |